Reflections

This gripped me and held me right till the last word ... damn you can write woman ... in this refection ? your so honest I love that about your writing , lovely , for you must be , to write such wonderful words ... there were patterns that repeated and footsteps sometimes faltered but I wouldn’t change a single step not a chapter would I have altered it is the things that I have done and the places I lived to see all those many things combined that compose the art of me Cat I love this one , these two stanza'a are perfect... bewitched and bedazzled I wish there were more stars to fall , for this one certainly deserves it ... I enjoyed this so very much .. Much Love Jayne x x

Maybe it is just I but I stuck on "it is the things that I have done" what about Just( the things that I have done) just a thought otherwise as always classic writing from a fine poet Chrys

Cat .... Just wanted you to know that this poem , I was telling my partner about it ,after asking me to read it , well , he simply loved it (hes a rough bush bloke and these are words of high praise coming from him) , just thought you might like to know that your reach is reaching far beyond the borders of neopoet ... beautiful poetry from a wonderful lady :) much love Jayne x

I found this to be such a beautiful poem, but this last two lines didn't quite live up to the rest of the poem for me. Once again just an awesome write, [and this could be just me, so see what other feedback you recieve.] I will duck, if need be. _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

I say? It's a quality write. That's nothing new, of course, of course, for poet you. And I'm grateful for it. For you. That you are Who you are Chuck PS: You might want to fix (unless you don't) a particular word: as in shorter are the days, I find that [lie] in front of me and Now the future [lies] ahead

Longer are the days behind A path I walked so free shorter are the days, I find that lie in front of me Now the future lies ahead Here branching can be found Should I take the low road? or head for higher ground? Do I detect an inconsistency here, unimportant though it may be? By inconsistency, I mean the earlier stanzas do not capitalize (except for I) anywhere. Then caps creep in. Should/ought angels, or me as their opposite, fear to tread here? Or not? Bear hugs, Chuck

And so very pretty. Thanx for the writing ... and my pleasure. Chuck

your puncs just they way they are. Right now. As in presently. You know, this instant. More hugs, Chuckles

=) You haven't lost a beat... How do you do it? ~Jess K. ----------------------- "So I open my door to my enemies, and ask could we wipe the slate clean? But they tell me to please go fu** myself; you know you just can't win" - Pink Floyd

Cat All I have are reflections and what if's and if only? I wish I could create such as you my friend always Electric Blue

This is the kind of poetry I really like. It is well constructed, down to earth, appeals to people of every greed and it is very cleverly written, your a natural. well done. Mand

Beautiful spin on, perhaps 'The Road Less Traveled'. I admit to be a sucker for rhyme, but it is so easy to sound repetitious or trap yourself with mundane points or even attach yourself to an overplayed cliche. I search for and I just love..absolutely love a totally unexpected eye opening, climactic ending. You've accomplished this and more. ..keep your door unlocked, I wish to see you again...:) PINT

touring around Neo tonight and found your poems and love this one I can hear the guitar being tuned the old folk wood harmonica on strap and frame the boot to keep time to tap love poetry like this yes high road or low road we never lose experience is beside us where ere we go Just turning older recent I muse now also and am enjoying the write such as yours Thank you

Dear Big Sis ..... I had to come back and read and I am more enchanted this time round ... beautiful work huni ... god you can write woman lol I said that way back when lol love and hugs Jayne x x