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Summer rain

SUMMER RAIN

 

Big blobs of summer rain

Racing down my window pain

 

Drenching flowers in their beds

A happy crowd nodding heads

 

Soaking through and quenching roots

Awakening dormant seedpod shoots

 

Tapping on earths crusted floor

Inviting earth worms to explore

 

Splashing children in their boots

Soaking gentlemen in their suits

 

Polishing foliage like a duster

Wetted leaves renew a-lustre

 

Bombing beetles in armoured suits

Well-armed soldiers, efficient troops

 

Creating rainbows in earths dome

A dazzling setting for our home

 

Globules of moisture heaven sent

A stunning landscape to invent

 

— mand, Jun 07, 2009

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Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 11 months ago

That was

just so enjoyable to read, just lovely imagery!!!! Keep writing! :)fleur
mand

mand

16 years 11 months ago

Fleur

Thank you Fleur, it's nice of you to take the time to read and comment on my poetry, I very much appreciate it. Mand
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shirley harrison

16 years ago

Oh Mand

Stunning poetry and well pictured realy wonderful! Much love you welsh beauty! shirley harrison