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Jun 07, 2009
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A quiet come back
When love surrounded us, we let i go
When love leaves us in the dark, we beg it back
i am gone and i am done with all of this
let me let you go
let me dream again
i wont come back and i wont beg for your love any more
When love leaves us in the dark, we beg it back
i am gone and i am done with all of this
let me let you go
let me dream again
i wont come back and i wont beg for your love any more
— washing tears, Jun 07, 2009
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Wafi
17 years 1 month ago
"When love surrounds us
weirdelf
17 years 1 month ago
simple direct and true, seems to be the nature of you
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