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A quiet come back

When love surrounded us, we let i go
When love leaves us in the dark, we beg it back

i am gone and i am done with all of this
let me let you go

let me dream again

i wont come back and i wont beg for your love any more
— washing tears, Jun 07, 2009

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Region, Country: sandusky, ohio, USA

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Wafi

17 years ago

"When love surrounds us

"When love surrounds us, we let it go When love leaves us in the dark, we beg it back" Very true... Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~