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A Muniment of life ...

Serene in stillness,
uncovering in sense
poise and reverence,
albedo delineates a world
away in chaos,
whilst discovering
this ease and comfort,
a tome
thought long lost,
resides in hands
gratified 
at its homecoming

Enfolded
in recollections
held between leaves,
this journal of time
crafted with loving eyes
stroked with passion,
smudged crossed markings,
reflecting angst
and joyousness of days ,
a story of a life's' past

Ink smeared lines
retching emotion
at times sparking
a flame of anger,
an ire
for past injustices,
evaporates as the papyrus
crumbles,
the wash of feeling
your crafted words brought
paid for
in love and despair

Tranquility leaving
images from 
long departed souls,
visiting memory,
bringing the warmth of
earlier happenings,
gazing into twin eyes
coloured as to be
different,
searching the foretelling
as doom had stalked her,
visited and was
victorious,
finding none

This perusal,
no search of wisdom
in faded sepia

Framed in richness
of early moments,
captured in a heartbeats
pause,
Past glories,
engraved by differing hands,
inks and lead ever wrote,
in loves print they lived
.. and live
in this
muniment to life

Embracing these recalls
mere breathes captured
in a rush of feelings

Saturated in memory,
serene stillness
overcomes all else ...
 

— Seren, Jun 07, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Critiques

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bjp

17 years ago

Dear Jayne-Chloe,

This is a thoughtful work. It is paced. It talks of calm and walks the talk. It is a reflection upon one's life. And, perhaps, a reshuffling of sorts. My favourite lines are these: a tome thought long lost, resides in hands gratified at its homecoming Enfolded in recollections held between leaves, this journal of time crafted with loving eyes ...ire for past injustices, evaporates as the papyrus crumbles, captured in a heartbeats pause, in loves print they lived Embracing these recalls mere breathes captured in a rush of feelings There are a couple of clerical matters: "a story of a life’s’ past" should read "life's", removing the second apostrophe. "mere breaths..." rather than "mere breathes..." is, I think, your intention. You are experimenting with words, which is all to the good. Overall, I believe you are taking poetry seriously, and that is certainly my pleasure to witness. Affectionately, Brian
Seren

Seren

17 years ago

Brian ...

Thought I would try something different ... hmmmm not so sure if I am liking it in the daylight ... but its ok and it was a departure , of a sort , from what I've been writing , might leave this one for a day or two and come back with a fresh mind I dont know if I achieved what I set out to do with this one ... thank you as always . for the read and the comment ... sorry about the clerical errors, never one of my strong points ... love and light Jayne x
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

17 years ago

Good One!

This piece is like a serinity prayer. I think it works. My favorite lines are the same as bjp's. Very soulful and restorative. Always, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 12 months ago

Hugs Cat ...

I thought I had left a message here for you this morning , guess I was tired and just thought I had .. so glad you like this one ... this wasnt meant to go in as a poem was just going to blog it as I fully believe if your asking in prayer for something .. its a little rude to ask for stars as well as have a prayer answered I felt in my opinion , much love Cat , Jayne x x Thank you hun I appreciate the read ((((((HUGZ)))))