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Jun 07, 2009
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OUTSIDE HEAVEN'S GATE
OUTSIDE HEAVEN’S GATE ( Inspired by this anonymous quote:"If you aren't in over your head,how do you know how tall you are?") If Passions don't consume youTill you’re satiated and fed,Where will you choose to lie? Languishing listlessly-among the half dead? Always meagre in your portionstaking small and smaller sips. Scorning the world with envy - with your scowling looks ! What a mean and miniscule measure -To take from Lifesuch paltry pleasure. Oh you idiots still wasting Time! squandering Love in her glorius prime. Amassing possessions, ever creating obsessionsto fill the chasm inside. When will you realize it's not too late ?Heedlessly standing
just outside
Heaven's gate.
Bj June 7, '09
just outside
Heaven's gate.
Bj June 7, '09
— Bonitaj, Jun 07, 2009
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