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TO TONYA

TO TONYA

My words
Are given to this lady
As the Embodiment
Of the writer
I soon will be

Never once have I seen her
Never was her voice
Memorize
I do not even know the first
Fact about her life

So why do I call her mom

One day
She said to me
Slow down
Find your way
A proper poem in grammar
Will come some day

Just write what you feel
Tough was her help
Pushing me to find my skills

Try it this way
So many times
She would say

So why do I call her mom

Without even knowing me
She gave her time and help
This was a priceless gilt
She gave as free

So why do I call her mom

I hope now
My little crazy poems
Brings her a smile
Still she might say
A little work here but you are on your way


— press, Jun 05, 2009

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Tonya

Tonya

17 years ago

My Dear Press,

Thank you so much. You honor me with your words, and I would not think of having you change one single syllable. Indeed you made me smile. I hope what i have to offer is nothing less than the next person. lol, I do feel like a momma hen taking you under my wing, although, i am unworthy of so much praise. You make me very proud of indeed. Thank you again my friend. Your doing great! Big momma hugs! lol Always, Tonya
press

press

17 years ago

mom

Mom don't give me that in your words [crap]how many times have U said that to me and I laugh so hard each time so let me cook U a dinner and serve it to U [THIS POEM] So U R not aloud to say [i am unworthy of so much praise.] this is my dinner my poem [DID I CRY WHEN U TOOK MY POEMS APART NO] so don't give me no crap I really hope U R laughing as I am I hope UR son will have fun because we know that he will be OK [HEY MAYBE HE MIGHT HAVE NEW POEMS TO WRITE] I am still smiling mom Press aka [son]
press

press

17 years ago

Tonya

Jayne thank U this was so much fun and yes I am still reading UR new poems [ who knows I may write one about U] and yes I am laughing as we have talked a lot but who knows it would be fun to see U smile and laugh Press love to all
Seren

Seren

17 years ago

I do smile and laugh quiet a

I do smile and laugh quiet a bit but at the moment I battle Ill health so I look for things to smile about this poem brought on such a smile .. lovely thought and I can read that Tonya is chuffed that you wrote it :) regards Jayne