IGNITED AWARENESS

like a pine swerving into the winds its soul dug through cracks in solid granite its spirit catching the gusts this is an amazing heart written peice Blue

Misty !!! wow I loved this your voice is loud and we can hear you oh so clearly and so eloquently and beautifully done ... my favourite of yours now (so far the journey isn't over) lol love and light Jayne x

I may have percieved the meaning of this entirely wrong,so I am not going to give my interpetation,just am going to say,I'm impressed! Loved the way you smashed so many words with opposite meanings together and made it work! Gee.

As if I dived in a deep lake with dark water. Well done. Konstantin.

I always try to find the peak of promise in another's writing & certainly there is loads of promise here, but if you are ok with honesty (remembering it IS only my opinion & means nothing negative) it kept undoing itself every line or 2, or sometimes in the same line. There is so much fantastic passion here & some brilliant expression, but I am hoping with just a tiny bit of tweeking you might have a truly excellent piece (though clearly I am the only voice here wanting you to to step up further... it's only because I think you can). At this point it feels like an uncontrolled rage an outpouring, flailing wildly, which has it's place, but if there was a little more pause for thought I believe this work would shine so much brighter, & fall more comfortably on the ears of the reader/listener. Despite the feedback I still say a strong congratulations, glad this came to Spotlight, I have been so busy I would probably have missed it, well done!~ Anni ~~~ "The moment one gives close attention to anything, even a blade of grass, it becomes a mysterious, awesome, indescribably magnificent world in itself" Henry Miller

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. It is very well written. It struck a nerve with me. Congradulation for making top poem. Keep up the great work. You have always written very well. Take care. Peace, Pixee

Congratulations on this poem earning the spotlight, it is highly deserving! I love that it contained two of my favorite words; "vicious" and "viscosity." Two very different words. Always, Cat

with an eary scary beauty cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present.