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New Remorse

I am the hypocrite reliving

everything that has been written

on the gold-gilded walls

of my cage.

I am the new age "breeder"

playing follow the the lying leader

hoping all this moral boundary

is a phase.

I hold the shot gun now

who will kill the Doctor bound

to deliver an abortion to the weak.

I am the kamikaze head

lying in the downey bed

of the sinners in the capital

who preach.

Hold me up by the cage

I'll give you pussy

I'll give you rage

I'm the yes-man with your bank

account- it's bleak-

the chance for civil rights

to be had by blacks/yellows/whites

'cause you judge me

by the accent that I keep.

So to all the boys that love boys

and the opposite/the celebate

the girls who play with toys

and those who love who they are with,

I say that there is

sex enough to please ya'

more than bombs in North Korea

And life's too short

for all these clever quips.


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bjp

16 years 11 months ago

Dear Sha (that sounds like Shay),

I read this to Olya without giving any opinion. She initially responded with a one word answer: "Strong." Of course, that is why I read it to her in the first place. I am just so impressed. I knew you had it in you. Bravo! Bravo! And I say again, Bravo! Affectionately, Brian P.S. Generally, I have mixed feelings about the stars, but not in this case.
S

sha_onarainyday

16 years 11 months ago

Thanks Brian, I’m glad I

Thanks Brian, I'm glad I impressed Olga and yourself. I tried to take your advice Brian, but my poems depends on my mood I guess. I try to put a little bit of social commentary into everything, but I don't always like to have so harsh of a tone. I'm not a harsh person, most of the time. Thanks for the *****
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bjp

16 years 11 months ago

Dear Sha,

I don't think boldness requires harshness. To me, "bold" is more about communicating our inner truths or our truthful perceptions despite our fears. In that sense, it is about leadership; helping warm the slow toothpaste flow of confidence from one of society's hearts to the next. And you have a great capacity for poetry, which this last poem is but a metaphor. In physical terms, beauty is largely governed by visual symmetry (Although, personally I prefer Olya's twist: "There are some things simply so ugly that they cannot but be beautiful."). In poetic terms, symmetry has its place, but beauty is really apparent when difficult maybe even hurtful truths are engaged almost sacrificially by a writer who is dismembering themselves in the telling; demonstrating their own commitment to sharing in such a way as to awe us into our own courage. "Harsh", in this environment, is merely one of a multitude of settings designed to ease the humdrum. Your courage, imagination, sexuality, intelligence and wit mean that you have the necessary tools for these tasks, leaving only the choosing and labouring up for grabs. You are a delight. Affectionately, Brian
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 11 months ago

Sha...

clever quips indeed!!! this ol world is crazy as hell but you my dear are refreshing... loved this whimsical write! Richard
Rett

Rett

16 years 11 months ago

Really loved this

Strong and yet piquant at the same time. Well done! Respectfully, Rett: "God made an idiot for practice, then he made a school board." Mark Twain For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905