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Yeah, I'm a dull guy now

Should we with chains forged in turbulent youth
bind present wisdom to obsolete folly,
maintain a grand fiction against newer truth
and urge wrinkled sorrow to try to seem jolly?

Our older tongues know that what was sweet then
can grow stale in the heart or rot in the soul.

We now would escape--just a question of when.

This captive grew slow in his juvenile hole
so cleanly cut, so certain sure this now
(alone!) would hold the everlasting real
---until disaster forced review of how
his good and manly digging made him feel.

So very fine to aim your feathered shaft
at virile duty, honor, endless love.

In middle years I caught the joke and laughed.

"YOU FOOOL!" the label fits yet, like a glove.

So, still the eager fool, I muddle by,
ambition trimmed and tethered, made quite meek.

My meta-plan consists in "cut and try"
and long commitment now means just a week.

So bland, so tame, so very weak of will,
so sadly lacking courage, vision short,
this mandate is too easy to fulfill:
no battle scars, no heros to report.
 

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poewriter58

16 years 11 months ago

Maturing

Does not have to be that way. You grow older wiser and calmer, and gain tolerance and patience I don't see how this would be deemed as dull . They are all excellent qualities that all people should have The unevenness works with this one, yes when read aloud Chrys
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Skumpfsklub

16 years 11 months ago

Thanks, Chrys,

I'm 'mock-agreeing' with the judgments of the majority around me. Most of us cling to false ideals forever. And letting go of the false ideal or spurning the destructive virtue in public wins you no accolade. Indeed, in some parts of the world, they shoot cowards, don't they? Why? Is bravery somehow appeased by the ritualized death of a coward? Seems to me that the first coward resolutely fleeing battle is the true moralist; he leadeth his people by the right path--perhaps not the righteous path, but his followers stand a better chance of doing the fine study thereafter. Similar examination of other cherished notions lead to the same ironies. And the same general form--bind yourself now, and live within those chains, and never grow wise enough to see the profound folly of commitment, the idiocy of unswerving loyalties. This is an impossible consideration for many fierce young minds, whose ideals remain untested in experience, who have only an ethic--a moral 'to do' list--and no ethics. They Know Everything Now. People of reason, code, law and certainty, deniers of doubt; They don't deal well with the contingent, the fuzzy, the mysterious, the unique. I remember. I was a complete monster of logic, an ogre of rectitude. I was impossible. And that's the reason for the tone of this poem. I-then wouldn't have heard it, and I-now must settle for what is almost certainly a vain attempt to smuggle in the seeds of skepticism.
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themoonman

16 years 11 months ago

Dull....

in agreement with Chrys on the flow of this, works well out loud and I too can relate... I was one of the impossible ones, wouldn't listen to shit... already knew enough. Funny how it turns around ehhh... getting older.... I've noticed you leaving some well thought out comments on poems... and this one to Chrys... I may have to follow you around a bit... mmmmuuahhhhhh... lol... really, loved it and the poem... Richard
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Skumpfsklub

16 years 3 months ago

Another worm must drown

There IS a rationale behind these (what are essentially repostings). People don't dig very far into the slush pile, and when you want review of your work, you gotta keep it in place actively. I choose to do that directly. I feel much better about it, now. It seemed to me 'immodest' before.
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Skumpfsklub

16 years 3 months ago

Why write another faux

Why write another faux comment, you ask? Because the poems I'm doin' that for today have not been visited a hundred times yet---and their 'visits' include a substantial number of 'visits' engendered by my returns to the pieces, and some spurious 'visits' that appear to be artifacts of bugs in the program. So, get used it: I keep recommenting until I feel that the poem has had enough exposure to lend value to the numbers.