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Jun 03, 2009
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Yeah, I'm a dull guy now
Should we with chains forged in turbulent youth
bind present wisdom to obsolete folly,
maintain a grand fiction against newer truth
and urge wrinkled sorrow to try to seem jolly?
Our older tongues know that what was sweet then
can grow stale in the heart or rot in the soul.
We now would escape--just a question of when.
This captive grew slow in his juvenile hole
so cleanly cut, so certain sure this now
(alone!) would hold the everlasting real
---until disaster forced review of how
his good and manly digging made him feel.
So very fine to aim your feathered shaft
at virile duty, honor, endless love.
In middle years I caught the joke and laughed.
"YOU FOOOL!" the label fits yet, like a glove.
So, still the eager fool, I muddle by,
ambition trimmed and tethered, made quite meek.
My meta-plan consists in "cut and try"
and long commitment now means just a week.
So bland, so tame, so very weak of will,
so sadly lacking courage, vision short,
this mandate is too easy to fulfill:
no battle scars, no heros to report.
bind present wisdom to obsolete folly,
maintain a grand fiction against newer truth
and urge wrinkled sorrow to try to seem jolly?
Our older tongues know that what was sweet then
can grow stale in the heart or rot in the soul.
We now would escape--just a question of when.
This captive grew slow in his juvenile hole
so cleanly cut, so certain sure this now
(alone!) would hold the everlasting real
---until disaster forced review of how
his good and manly digging made him feel.
So very fine to aim your feathered shaft
at virile duty, honor, endless love.
In middle years I caught the joke and laughed.
"YOU FOOOL!" the label fits yet, like a glove.
So, still the eager fool, I muddle by,
ambition trimmed and tethered, made quite meek.
My meta-plan consists in "cut and try"
and long commitment now means just a week.
So bland, so tame, so very weak of will,
so sadly lacking courage, vision short,
this mandate is too easy to fulfill:
no battle scars, no heros to report.
Comments
poewriter58
16 years 11 months ago
Maturing
Skumpfsklub
16 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Chrys,
themoonman
16 years 11 months ago
Dull....
Skumpfsklub
16 years 3 months ago
Another worm must drown
Skumpfsklub
16 years 3 months ago
see previous faux comment
Skumpfsklub
16 years 3 months ago
Why write another faux