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Honey Extraction

Genius of bees
wonder of honey oozing
sticky fingered joy

— faerybeki, May 31, 2009

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Ink Dragon

17 years ago

Sweet, Beki,

reminds me of Winnie the Pooh. Hunny! I love honey, and I love how you have mastered haikus! Yours, ~Nina
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

Dear Nina, I love Winnie,

Dear Nina, I love Winnie, still can't cross a bridge without stopping for a game of poohsticks! lol how old am I?! So happy you're liking my haikus, wouldn't call myself a master, but must say I really enjoy doing them :) That you think them effective Nina, means the world to me, your opinion is much appreciated and vastly respected, oh and Nina, the honey was gorgeous, fresh from the hive, seeping out, glistening and so full of vitality, I was almost buzzing after dipping my finger in so often! lovely way to spend an afternoon :) and my Omi loved it! :) hope all's well with you dear poetess, much love b xx
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

17 years ago

:)

Thanks for the smile that this has put on my face! always, Cat
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

:)

So happy to have made you smile Cat! and thank you for the smile your comment has given me! :) hooray! much love b x
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

I have another friend who

I have another friend who drinks Earl Grey, sweet, hot and with no milk, just like Captain Jean Luc Picard lol always feel so honoured O when you stop to leave a mark here, glad you liked the poem :) hope all's well with you. much love b x
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Wafi

17 years ago

Hey Sweet Beki

Hey sweet Beki, my mouth watered while reading this. A sweet haiku indeed. By chance I just had 1 spoon of honey, with 5 drops of black seed oil a few minutes before I logged in, that is good for stomach as I had some gas trouble. Enjoyed this a lot, specially "sticky fingered joy" :) Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

Manena Wafi, what a

Manena Wafi, what a wonderful coincidence that you read my haiku with the taste of honey in your mouth! Hope it worked and your stomach is better :) Happy you enjoyed the poem Wafi, always grateful for your comments and opinion, much love b xx
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paparazii

17 years ago

Yakanaka

A great yummy haiku Beki, honey---(huchi). Pleasant days and good nights Ephy