True Friends

Really loved this piece, friendship is so important these days, especially when you can find the one who will stick with you through the good and the bad. I've known my best friend since grade 7 and we've been through everything together. Don't know what I would've done without her. You did an excellent job rhyming, that is something that takes some effort and deserves applause. Beautiful imagery, too, I don't even know my favorite lines, they're all so good!!! Great job. Peace n Love Katie

Ann of Norway Oh friendship is the greatest of all "loves" and here you express it well and must yourself be a worthy friend, in troubles one knows who they are as you say, others shy away and show their true colours. I do like your use of " Rich imagery flows framed and enhanced, a gallery of pictures were once we danced.".... ...I can picture the flowers in colours spreading where your feet, her feet, his feet, have trodden, just springing up behind you as you go, beautiful, and framed are the memories of times together for always, no? "a gallery of pictures were once we danced." ....did you mean were or was it where? If this is a first try then you have the makings of a poet, very nice mand on, keep on. And love from Ann.

This is one for the platform. You should give it to the CO - you know how they sometimes like to read poetry but don't always recognize good poetry? ;) Just loved this Mand and it certainly came back around at the right time for me as a reminder to reach out to my true friends instead of keeping them at arms length. Thanks, Lisa