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May 31, 2009
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The Beach
Soft golden sand
Lines the beach
like a carpet
It is soft and warm to walk on
pretty sea shells lay scattered
creating a beautiful pattern on the beach
the calm blue water of the ocean
sparkles, like diamonds in the midday sun
a peaceful noise comes from the waves that gently roll onto the sand
palm trees and coconut trees
are gently swaying ,from the warm breeze that blows through the air
a crab, moving quickly,
heads towards a rock pool
which sits at the water's edge
here, paradise, reign's with it's beauty
— karen, May 31, 2009
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Morgana Tragic…
16 years 11 months ago
Hey Karen,