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To Forget would be Profane
A young man fresh
off to the war,
only to come back
a shadow
Through the years
the toll it took,
wasn’t overlooked
In a night
while we slept,
of one mans fright
he wept
Stumbling
through the house
screaming of war
the horror and carnage
his hatred of awe
He’d wake
from his terror
in a
cold hard sweat
and still
forgotten
I haven’t yet
the look
on his face
and pain
in his eyes
the hurt
he was feeling
deep inside
We would hold him,
and coo,
“Its all right Pa”
holding him close,
trying hard not to cry,
while shivers overtook
his body marred
In the darkness
he would quietly weep
we’d be told not to listen
"Bloody go back to sleep!"
I still lay and think
of those horrible night’s
remembering his fear
the horror and fright
I shed my own tears
for all his hurts
Remembering his sacrifice
till tears shake my girth
forgetting their sacrifice ?
never what its worth
Critiques
orgami
17 years ago
this is a sombre and beautiful poem honouring those
Seren
17 years ago
Dearest Steven
Geezer
17 years ago
Broken Man
Seren
17 years ago
Gee
press
17 years ago
A Broken Man
Seren
17 years ago
Thank you for your kind
Craig Norris
17 years ago
Hey Seren, you look a little different tonight..
Seren
17 years ago
Thanks Craig … much
Seren
17 years ago
Blanka