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To Forget would be Profane

A young man fresh
off to the war,
only to come back
a shadow

Through the years
the toll it took,
wasn’t overlooked

In a night
while we slept,
of one mans fright
he wept

Stumbling
through the house
screaming of war
the horror and carnage
his hatred of awe

He’d wake
from his terror
in a
cold hard sweat
and still
forgotten
I haven’t yet
the look
on his face
and pain
in his eyes
the hurt
he was feeling
deep inside

We would hold him,
and coo,
“Its all right Pa”
holding him close,
trying hard not to cry,
while shivers overtook
his body marred

In the darkness
he would quietly weep
we’d be told not to listen
"Bloody go back to sleep!"

I still lay and think
of those horrible night’s
remembering his fear
the horror and fright
I shed my own tears
for all his hurts

Remembering his sacrifice
till tears shake my girth
forgetting their sacrifice ?
never what its worth
 

— Seren, May 30, 2009

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Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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orgami

17 years ago

this is a sombre and beautiful poem honouring those

told of war Vietnam in my childhood twelve asked if we would "kill a man" my parents lost local freinds in the war school mates off to the big one we viewed the news heard about kids not much older then us (eight year old teenagers American) Over there in the jungles no one talked back then eighties they started to come back move up to Canada or were here already the great war my uncles returned just now hearing about the nightmares one still suffers from hes eighty six I think another didnt talk much about it what was there to be said when your just a kid volunteering and then the years surviving this poem just fills in another chapter of questions of that era this is a heartbreaking poem Seren amazing write!!
Seren

Seren

17 years ago

Dearest Steven

I cant tell you how much your words meen ... My Pa was a WW2 vet he served from the 8th of Janurary 1942 till he left the army 18th april 1946 , he was a tough old bird my Pa , but he fought for his country with pride , He was tormented by his demons more as he got older .. The first time I remember him running though our house was xmas eve when I was 4 , to hear him scream in horror will live with me till the day I die ... He has passed on now but I remembered him in this poem his sacrifice shouldn't be in vain or forgotten ... I often wonder how different he would have been had he not spent so many years on the front lines .. love and regard Jayne x x
Geezer

Geezer

17 years ago

Broken Man

This is an awesome work Seren! There are so many of these poor soldiers,that have their lives so torn up. Those of us who have never been there,cannot comprehend the carnage that they have seen. You have portrayed the image of the collective horror that they have endured,and what continues to affect their lives. After going back to read this poem again,I still can't find any flaws. Maybe someone else can get past the vision of this poor man to see technical or mechanical errors,but I can't, Awesome job Seren!...Gee
Seren

Seren

17 years ago

Gee

I dont know what to say I feel honored by your words ... But I will say my Pa was a good man and he has left us now and is with Nana as it should be ... I said in my comment to Orgami that they shouldn't be forgotten .. and that applies to both allies and enemies , our enemies of 64yrs ago are now some of our dearest friends ... so it isnt just our losses I want remembered BUT all loses ... Its a sad part of war ... and now my son goes away in august with the army , the legacy lives on in my child , My grandfather would be most proud of him ... Love and Light Jayne x x
press

press

17 years ago

A Broken Man

JC GREAT POEM [ FLOWING & GROWING] smile's to U Press
Seren

Seren

17 years ago

Blanka

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment much appreciated :) Love and Light Jayne :)