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May 30, 2009
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Split Brain Maniacs...
Split brain maniacs
full of bullshit
concerning themselves
with other peoples business
love sick poetry
turns their heads
walk the streets
in search of nothing
a shot in the arm
a knife in the back
coming out of nowhere
running haywire
to a dead
bulls eye stop...
full of bullshit
concerning themselves
with other peoples business
love sick poetry
turns their heads
walk the streets
in search of nothing
a shot in the arm
a knife in the back
coming out of nowhere
running haywire
to a dead
bulls eye stop...
— Fleur MacDonald, May 30, 2009
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Craig Norris
17 years 1 month ago
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Fleur MacDonald
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