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Jun 01, 2009
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ragged wedding hall
Randomly acted,
these flowers of prescience
I handed you,
a dried bouquet on your wedding day.
You groomed his lonely alter
with a keening wind.
Pulled the drainplug on his dreams,
as your accomplice in this farce
took you inverted,
draped your arse across his shoulder
trophied
as some caveman spectacle,
leaving this
a ragged wedding hall.
Marooned, marked out,
this is a desert,
a carpark to your indifference,
driving, sailing in a fast ship,
you left us
listening to
the mournful clanging of his heart start.
these flowers of prescience
I handed you,
a dried bouquet on your wedding day.
You groomed his lonely alter
with a keening wind.
Pulled the drainplug on his dreams,
as your accomplice in this farce
took you inverted,
draped your arse across his shoulder
trophied
as some caveman spectacle,
leaving this
a ragged wedding hall.
Marooned, marked out,
this is a desert,
a carpark to your indifference,
driving, sailing in a fast ship,
you left us
listening to
the mournful clanging of his heart start.
Comments
Bonitaj
16 years 11 months ago
Hi Craig! Damn! This is
Craig Norris
16 years 11 months ago
thanks Bonitaj
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Craig,
Craig Norris
16 years 11 months ago
love these reflections
Bonitaj
16 years 11 months ago
RAGGED WEDDING HALL
Craig Norris
16 years 11 months ago
I was just a spectator
Craig Norris
16 years 11 months ago
thank you Blanka