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leather sandals

Years ago, I caught a bus to the end of the road
and walked into the Himalaya's.
In my leather sandals and naivete.

These ancient trails of stone worn smooth,
pristine peaks, impregnable,
beyond cables and monoxide
bakery's and latte's of indulgence.

Passing Yaks wear golden bells tinkling,
stone wheels slowly turning,
grinding, roasted corn.
This rock hut above a small stream
water wheeling through their generations.
One rupee bought a bagful,
poor mans meal.

High on these mountain passes
I look down upon the mailplane,
as it flies to make delivery
droning above the Dudh Khosi ,
a distant glinting ribbon of a river. 

My soul walks barefoot beside me,
leaves me my leather sandals
for the passes in the mountains.

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orgami

16 years 11 months ago

Been to the mountians once

Rockies in Canada they are not the mountians you write of but equally appealing Love this poem I had sandals once Romans wore them Greeks thenatives here wore moccasins skins crafted like a shoe sometimes I always enjoyed travelling seeing things experiencing I live in a city now my world down to a few blocks for years long gone are thedays of bush camping living here there this is the life everyone wants but we all need to get out as you say Beyond the "latte" You have a great skill at writing Craig I feel Like I saw the plane glinting from the sun down there
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Craig Norris

16 years 11 months ago

plane glinting

thanks O, it was a different moment, looking around for the plane I could hear, and then to see it below me, my feet upon the ground. Cheers. Craig
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Bert Lamrick

16 years 11 months ago

How do you do it?

Man, it's like everything you write lately is better than the one before it. You are truly on a roll, my friend. This one is far and away my favorite. Keep it coming... Sincerely, Rick
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Craig Norris

16 years 11 months ago

you know

how its done Rick, you told me. Cheers and thanks. Craig
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Craig Norris

16 years 11 months ago

there is a rose called Jacqueline

I should like to see it in my garden. This was inspired as I read the words of a woman, who told me of her walking long distances, other mountains. Love. Craig
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 11 months ago

Craig, I really enjoyed this

Craig, I really enjoyed this journey of a poem :) Great stuff, LOVE those last 3 lines! much love b x Ps glad you don't do socks and sandal thing ;) lol barefoot's always best, lets you use your legs like straws for sucking up the feel of the earth :)
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Craig Norris

16 years 11 months ago

socks and sandals

and knee length shorts, now there's a sight, I wonder in the world of fashion if that combination will ever resurface. Did Boudica run barefoot in Surrey? Thanks Bek. Love. Craig
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bjp

16 years 11 months ago

Dear Craig,

You have the cadence. It lets lines wander wistfully, as yours do. Very nice. Very nice indeed. As usual, superb colour. with warm regards, Brian
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Craig Norris

16 years 11 months ago

what a word

Thank you Brian, you give such good direction with just the minimum of fuss, enjoying the earning. Cheers. Craig