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May 28, 2009
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To bring such things to worded wing
So lovely then
This waterfall
This ocean undercurrent
So lovely
sweeping sentiment
calm
full
bewildered still
but sated.
You sift through
and know the centre
the essence and the access
and so the door swings open
and unbidden your procession seeks you
yes, it is yours
you call it with your own beautifully choreographed whispers
Every note I sang
you then transcribed
I cannot know you might
Hence you become the light
My eyes are drawn to you, slow blinking and in awe
I wonder if you know
Swept by these
This lovely flow
Yet within me or beside
These jagged fixtures still collide
I fall through these eternally
It slices up my soft existance
The pretty vivid bloom of life escaping
with such grace
Painting here my moments
in sweeping seductive strokes
like arabic writing in cumulus cloud
Yet you read them still
Lucidity your halo
And possibly your curse.
I am always by the water
Immersed or looking on
(did you hide my selky skin?, I am lost now, landbound and longing)
And always falling from the sky
Returning … lift, rise, longing and more longing
at these moments I can love me as I am,
but it's a secret and short lived
I wish for harmony
Yet create small knots of discord
and freying at the edges
some unpeeling from the corners
still, I prefer the patterns of such chaos sometimes
it’s the wild in me
the whimsical
the need to pull the thread
and feel the thing unravel
but I digress
and you
are patient
and so smooth
so unruffled, fluid one
with eyes inside your heart surely
is that where you feel all this from?
I think I know, but cannot ever put such things to worded wing
This waterfall
This ocean undercurrent
So lovely
sweeping sentiment
calm
full
bewildered still
but sated.
You sift through
and know the centre
the essence and the access
and so the door swings open
and unbidden your procession seeks you
yes, it is yours
you call it with your own beautifully choreographed whispers
Every note I sang
you then transcribed
I cannot know you might
Hence you become the light
My eyes are drawn to you, slow blinking and in awe
I wonder if you know
Swept by these
This lovely flow
Yet within me or beside
These jagged fixtures still collide
I fall through these eternally
It slices up my soft existance
The pretty vivid bloom of life escaping
with such grace
Painting here my moments
in sweeping seductive strokes
like arabic writing in cumulus cloud
Yet you read them still
Lucidity your halo
And possibly your curse.
I am always by the water
Immersed or looking on
(did you hide my selky skin?, I am lost now, landbound and longing)
And always falling from the sky
Returning … lift, rise, longing and more longing
at these moments I can love me as I am,
but it's a secret and short lived
I wish for harmony
Yet create small knots of discord
and freying at the edges
some unpeeling from the corners
still, I prefer the patterns of such chaos sometimes
it’s the wild in me
the whimsical
the need to pull the thread
and feel the thing unravel
but I digress
and you
are patient
and so smooth
so unruffled, fluid one
with eyes inside your heart surely
is that where you feel all this from?
I think I know, but cannot ever put such things to worded wing
— Cloudthings, May 28, 2009
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bjp
17 years ago
Dear Anni,
Cloudthings
17 years ago
Wonderful thing the intermingling of concept & perception, you b
bjp
17 years ago
Dear Anni,
Lonnie
17 years ago
Quintisential Clarity from Cloudthings!
Cloudthings
17 years ago
beautiful thing to dive into a new way of working with words & f
Geezer
17 years ago
Worded Wings
Cloudthings
17 years ago
Love your thoughts as always though Gee, it's nice to share our
Cloudthings
17 years ago
I do love the idea that Selkies are nestled in my writing!
orgami
17 years ago
this is what saved me
Cloudthings
17 years ago
I am glad to know you also find a spark in my work that feeds yo
Seren
17 years ago
Poetry , is for me ? A
Cloudthings
17 years ago
How beautiful Jayne, thank you, that is lovely, I am really glow
Race_9togo
17 years ago
Selkies
Cloudthings
17 years ago
Ah I am spoilt by all my favourite poets here, thank you Jim, ho