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Of my favored poet

 Whenever  I read his poems,

seeking the sweetness within the calyx,

I get smothered with pollen.

I come home wondrously golden

though unrecognizable,

thick with the colours

of love I have known,

leaving a trail wherever I go.




I’m full of signs.

You can read me like a book,

know where I drink,

and the company I keep.

The pollen of delight 

is stuck all over me:

saffrons, burnt siennas—

irrefutable evidence

of his place in my life.

 

And when I dance with you

in my arms

I see pollen on your eyelashes,

in your hair...

Then a golden glow, a halo—

And soon we cannot tell 

one from the other

 

 

 

 


— Celadon, May 28, 2009

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bjp

17 years ago

Dear Celadon,

Was it Tokyo's underground in which you were waiting? What a wondrous quiet thunder of a yellow peddle you have parachuted in upon. Welcome. If it is not clear, I love the poem. Hope you will mingle here and there. Everyone's a quest and the host. Adieu, Brian
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Celadon

17 years ago

If it's not clear...

Thank you for your comments. Thinking about the clarity aspect. I don't want to be obtuse and am wondering how to simplify. I revised using punctuation. And thanks for the welcome! Regards! Celadon
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barbsdad2003

17 years ago

May I suggest ...

a stanza break: leaving a trail wherever I go. I’m full of signs. leaving a trail wherever I go. I’m full of signs. --- And as to Every time I read his poems, perhaps a change to Whenever I read his poems. Not sure why I prefer the latter. But I do. --- Delightful imagery. I especially like "thick with the colours/of love I have known ...." And of course there's sprinkled throughout much, much more to like. A beautifully wrought piece. Glad you've come on the scene. Look forward to more. Thanx much, Chuck
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Celadon

17 years ago

Revision ideas

Hi Chuck! Your notes are good! "Whenever" is smoother in sound and the stanza break works well! Thanks so much! Glad I'm here too! I won't be around for the next few days 'cause my laptop needs a check-up. Warm regards, Marion