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May 28, 2009
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Of my favored poet
Whenever I read his poems,
seeking the sweetness within the calyx,
I get smothered with pollen.
I come home wondrously golden
though unrecognizable,
thick with the colours
of love I have known,
leaving a trail wherever I go.
I’m full of signs.
You can read me like a book,
know where I drink,
and the company I keep.
The pollen of delight
is stuck all over me:
saffrons, burnt siennas—
irrefutable evidence
of his place in my life.
And when I dance with you
in my arms
I see pollen on your eyelashes,
in your hair...
Then a golden glow, a halo—
And soon we cannot tell
one from the other
— Celadon, May 28, 2009
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Bert Lamrick
17 years 2 months ago
Exquisite imagery
bjp
17 years 2 months ago
Dear Celadon,
Celadon
17 years 2 months ago
If it's not clear...
barbsdad2003
17 years 2 months ago
May I suggest ...
Celadon
17 years 1 month ago
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