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May 26, 2009
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MY DREAM
MY DREAM
When the day ends
And safety surround me
My true face
Is alluded out
For a night to breath
In that day
So much has my face seen
The truth
The evil
The love
My face knows in me
This face is under control
My eyes are open
But soon my sleep
Will close
A sleep , my true face can breath
And unleash
My fears
Into what I love
And what I need
As I dream
Is a ride, though broken scene
Some are clear
Others are beyond to see
When I awake
Those dreams
Can’t take shape
The scenes ,dreamt
By me
Will try to make
my new day clean
When the day ends
And safety surround me
My true face
Is alluded out
For a night to breath
In that day
So much has my face seen
The truth
The evil
The love
My face knows in me
This face is under control
My eyes are open
But soon my sleep
Will close
A sleep , my true face can breath
And unleash
My fears
Into what I love
And what I need
As I dream
Is a ride, though broken scene
Some are clear
Others are beyond to see
When I awake
Those dreams
Can’t take shape
The scenes ,dreamt
By me
Will try to make
my new day clean
— press, May 26, 2009
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