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Mothers

My mother said “Son wear a vest

The cold will go straight to your chest

Be careful you don’t catch a chill

For I don’t want you getting ill”

“Don’t worry Mum” I’d turn and say

“because when I go out to play

I run around an awful lot

And end up getting jolly hot

My face gets red and I perspire

It feels just like my skins on fire

I get as warm as warm as curry

As I tear round in such a hurry

So mother won’t you hear me please

There is no way that I will freeze

Its summer now, and then what’s more

Mum, I’m nearly fifty four”

© John W Fenn 26-05-2009

— shazbat, May 26, 2009

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Region, Country: Norfolk, UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Kipling, T.S Eliot, Hilaire Belloc, Ogden Nash, Spike Milligan and many more.

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years ago

Mothers...

they can't help themselves... lol... I am fifty and mine is still giving me those kind of advisories... and I love it. smiling with you John... Richard
shazbat

shazbat

17 years ago

Richard, I think all mothers

Richard, I think all mothers are like this no matter how old you get, my kids are all 30 ish and my wife still treats them as if they were 10 come to that she treats me like that sometimes too. Thanks for reading. John