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May 26, 2009
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Mothers
My mother said “Son wear a vest
The cold will go straight to your chest
Be careful you don’t catch a chill
For I don’t want you getting ill”
“Don’t worry Mum” I’d turn and say
“because when I go out to play
I run around an awful lot
And end up getting jolly hot
My face gets red and I perspire
It feels just like my skins on fire
I get as warm as warm as curry
As I tear round in such a hurry
So mother won’t you hear me please
There is no way that I will freeze
Its summer now, and then what’s more
Mum, I’m nearly fifty four”
© John W Fenn 26-05-2009
— shazbat, May 26, 2009
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themoonman
17 years ago
Mothers...
shazbat
17 years ago
Richard, I think all mothers