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Empty

Here I sit starring wide-eyed at a blank page
The muse flutters by leaving a word or two
Scribbled on the white canvas
But just as quickly, she is gone
Taking the ink in the wells with her
Even the lead in the pencils 
Is illegible against the bare paper.

Why does she tease me so?
Why does she leave me hanging with bated breath
Waiting and longing for her return?
My passion is to write,
Visions of stories dance through my mind
But putting the words to paper
Is a daunting task
That escapes my ability
without her.

Then I’m told of a place
Hidden under the burgundy carpet
A trap door opened only by a heart shaped key
This key given only to the pure of heart
By the pure of heart
Is placed in my hand by one of my trusted clan

I tremble as I pull back the carpet
To reveal the locked trap door
With shaking fingers I slip the key into its lock

Click

The lock falls to the ground
I slowly open the door

The room of muses is empty…

                  Written by Tink 5/26/09 2:26pm

— Tink, May 26, 2009

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Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years ago

Tink

This is cute, my muse runs through my mind so quickly that I can't get it to paper before I forget the sentences I wanted. bated "breathe", I think the "e" should be left off of the word "breathe". Sincerely, Linda
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Tink

17 years ago

thanks linda!

I just want to write and find myself starring at a blank page with a loss of words to put on it. I have trillions of ideas running through my head all the time, until that is I get to the paper... Glad you liked it. Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink
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Ink Dragon

17 years ago

Hi Tink,

You capture the feeling of writer's block well here. I think every poet knows the feeling. As Mark Haddon writes in his poem "Poets": "They write a word and then another word. It is usually wrong. Their crossings out are legion." Yours, ~Nina P.S. starring-> staring? P.P.S. Hire a headhunter to find your muse, so you can fire her!
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Tink

17 years ago

Thank you Nina.

I will fix staring! And headhunters are too expensive!!! I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Hopefully now I can keep on writing!! I feel the need for a part 5 of the Vampire and the Mist! Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink
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Tink

17 years ago

Hey Julie!

Thank you for the advice. I do like the example, I will do some thinking on this. (and of course I don't mind - after all, this is why we are here, to get help in expanding ourselves to become better!) i'm glad you like this one. Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years ago

Interesting

The take I got from this was that there are no muses but those we make, in the end. And the poem itself was ironic to me...a written piece implies the block is gone! I liked this one a lot, Tink. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
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Tink

17 years ago

JIM!

Hello my friend! Thanks and I'm glad you like this piece. Here's to hoping the block is gone!!!! I hate when the ideas are bouncing off the inside of my skull and somehow the words are lost by the time they get to the fingers. (Plus the novel is haunting me and begging to be worked on again!) Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years ago

Yeah, mine is off seeing other poets again,

Oh, muse, don't take your inspiration to town! I feel bloated with all the stuff that's gone down for me this year, it would just be a stream of grief, trauma and woe, and I'm sure extremely boring, so I'm going to put it all in a senryu and post it now, cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present.
Pixee

Pixee

17 years ago

I know exactly how you feel!

I thoroughly understand where you are at. I enjoyed this poem with a crying heart. You write well enough to make my eyes swell up. Thank you for leading me here! I needed to read this poem. I feel the same way at this moment. A bad case of writers block. Take care of you!! Your Friend, Pixee
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 11 months ago

Empty

Tink I think your muse must be hungry probably popped out for a pizza or a cup of coffee. I do not have a ruby red carpet with a secret trap door below There is only one who holds the key to my heart. But the door is only ajar at present. I too know what it is like staring into the blank sheet that lays before me as the paper waits. My head full of visions trying to capture it so for me to make my first mark to start and run like the wind until it drops and the pen is dry hoping it has captured my thoughts and dreams once again as on paper they seem to stay. If only the words would fly off of the paper that waits and our souls meet and entwine forever. Electric blue