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Truth

ignited,
whispering inside like light.
A light with all yellow sun.
Life, once vanquished, evolves.
Yesterday only usurps
making its solemn tapestry, yield

Pixels lay even, around stars enveloped;
capturing only movements entranced.
Beside all clear knowledge
today, only
memories engulf.

— Shadowrose, May 25, 2009

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Region, Country: Calgary, Alberta

Favorite Poets: Maya Angelou, Robert Frost, Robert Browning, Emily Dickinson

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yenti

yenti

17 years ago

Shadow

I feel that this one needs a little tender care as it drifted off from its pathway. There seems to be room for more on this theme to bring in the reader, maybe I missed the main point, you will let me know if I have, Yours Ian.T