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May 25, 2009
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Goodbye;
Am i welcome?
Maybe not...
if i am,
then whats the plot?
Fairy tale,
of the moon,
crescent hook,
in the sky,
beautiful and bright,
don't sink in light!
Scarlet rose,
you died too soon,
just like my crescent moon.
Bending down,
needing waters taste.
Its like I'm here my dear,
but your no longer near.
I come to see,
you suddenly die from need.
Why ,oh why, did you leave me?
Oh yes, to see me,
You saw then you left,
Before I died you theft,
robbing my heart,
then breaking.
Good bye my moon,
you and my rose,
both left too soon.
— ANC1996, May 25, 2009
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Critiques
weirdelf
17 years 2 months ago
cool, highly lyrical
Morgana Tragic…
17 years 2 months ago
Ooooooooooo Adri
ANC1996
17 years 2 months ago
Thnks Guys!!!
Kailashana
17 years 2 months ago
Really cool, jaunty poem…
Seren
17 years 2 months ago
ANC
ANC1996
17 years 2 months ago
Thanksss;
ANC1996
17 years 1 month ago
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