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The Ring

I contemplate its presence,

a simple, burnished epitaph caught in an accidental sun; life empty without a finger. Name and date still legible, no longer hidden, pressed and twisting against taut skin.

Lying accusingly on the dresser,

untouched, unwanted, its worn circle etched with the work of living; earth, weeds, dishes - carrots and potato-peel. But not the love it once encircled, admiring faces gazing reflected in the shine of new spun gold on entwined fingers,

stretched across a lover’s table

laid for only two; clinking against crystal champagne flutes bubbling with promise, frothed in celebration.
  …….. But now alone, experience done, like some scarred fighter fallen on hard times punched with the hole of drunk remembrance. An ornament of time, nevermore to be worn, never thrown. A golden artifact gathering the dust of neglect and the dull tarnish of fading memory.

— professor, May 24, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: China/Sichuan/Chengdu, CHN

Favorite Poets: Yeats, Elliot, Auden, Keats, Shelley, Byron

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years ago

Oh ring what tales you tell

I too have an empty ring lying in a drawer among the old keys and nut cases, rubber bands and faded ribbons. I liked the way you spun this vortex of gold, now tarnished and old. "its worn circle etched" Lovely poem Professor of memories gone. Yours Ann of Norway
professor

professor

17 years ago

Thankyou Ann

Just imagine if we all clubbed together and melted down our rings Tolkien style, how much richer we would be lol. But of course we wont. They sit there as a servant to memory and a constant reminder of failure. Keith
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years ago

Hey Keith, it is good that

Hey Keith, it is good that inanimate objects speak not (can you imagine what troubles would befall?) However ,your *ring* is quite elegant and truthful with your poetic voice. I too have given voice to rings....clothes left behind...beds...tables...moonlight... A new ring, a new love, a new poem. Long live the new, out with the old! (No matter how deep the connections lie, we sooner or later must give them up, eh?) Love. ~A "No one shall be subjected to torture or to cruel, inhuman or degrading treatment of punishment." Article 5 of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.
professor

professor

17 years ago

Ah New Rings for Old

Anna Scheherazade. There is the rub of the tale and there be the Genie. The connections can be split asunder sometimes with consumate ease but the wonder at what was then and what is now will always be testament to the constant wheel of change. Love K
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

Hi Keith, a wonderful poem

Hi Keith, a wonderful poem Sir! so full of emotion, such exquisite sadness it evoked in me, really beautifully written, can't really say much more than that Keith, sometimes your work just bowls me over, much love b xx
professor

professor

17 years ago

Very sweet of you Beki

and since you are English i cannot resist playing on your words saying that I am glad i managed to bowl a Maiden over. Not sure how many of our US friends will appreciate the cricket allusion but maybe some of the Aussies will rake over the Ashes and know the answer lol. Thanks again. In sadness there can be great beauty but there is even more when its passes and you move on. Love K
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

Lol K, let’s hope for lots

Lol K, let's hope for lots of those this summer hey?! There can indeed be something exquisitely beautiful in sadness but as you say more so when passed through and survived, good lessons to be learnt in loss I guess if one chooses to see them, and you strike me as a learned man, much love b xx
Seren

Seren

17 years ago

Dont know what to say Keith

Dont know what to say Keith .. I shall let the stars speak for me this time .. When I digest this a little more I shall comment further but this is incredibly sad .. hit a home run this time prof .. love J x
professor

professor

17 years ago

Stuck dumb huh JayC?

well that is most certainly a great compliment lol. Yes it is incredibly sad but such a life failure could never be otherwise. The joy is though that it is possible to start again and do a much better job the next time round so you dont end up tied eternally to a donkey's tail worrying about protecting your tender parts from the next well aimed kick. Love Keith
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years ago

Keith

Thank heavens, at first I thought this was going to be about that God-awful movie! Such a sad and personal write - but, as you say, it opens the doors to another life, and maybe another love. Isn't artefact supposed to be artifact, though?? ---------------------------------------- "Until that ‘morrow render unto me That which is mine my stipend well deserved The fairest flower of your progeny Your sons, your daughters your hopes and your dreams The cruel consequence of your conceit" - Steve Earle
professor

professor

17 years ago

Thanks Jess

This was a movie that ran almost as long as The Ring in fact lol. The doors to another life are indeed open as you say. And oops, you are indeed correct about "artifact" that one seems to have slipped through the net and i didn't intend reference to the French Black metal group of that name or indeed the software design company in Seattle.....although perhaps the former might even be appropriate! Keith
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LittleRedDragon2286

17 years ago

I wrote a short story about a ring

but it was just about one of those you find atop a drinks can. I showed it to my girlfriend but she only laughed at it *sighs with deep feelings*
professor

professor

17 years ago

Well ring pulls have been

used as temporary substitutes from time to time...could be a challenge to write meaningfully about one though lol. Thanks for making me smile. Keith
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years ago

What might have been? What was? You tell the story of the ring s

Hmmm, I cannot keep up these days, a weekend from Neo seems like a month in Neoland & amazing works abound. This one less flowery & evocative than your others (I know of), yet direct it has power to punch the wind from the tenderness as it must with that story. These tales... the finger newly naked indentation blushing (with embarrasment? or loss?) pale & unused to exposure. The flush of longing for what might have been? What was? You tell the story of the ring so well More sighs from me tonight I remember moments akin to this. xx~ Anni ~~~ "Love has nothing to do with what you are expecting to get, it's what you are expected to give -- which is everything." -Anon
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orgami

17 years ago

never more

and never was yet though this tale is grand and superbly crafted the last line I falter to recieve for in my memories the fade is thin I horde experience like Gollum at moments and cast others away like precious gold such is the tale of the twist learned burned and yearned into me Love reading your structure words experience always a thrill But im cynical at times having my parents split at twelve and then relationships fall like houses of cards To this day I wear not any ring on my fingers Wonderful poem again!!!
professor

professor

17 years ago

Yes i can see how you might object to fading memory

under the circumstances Orgami although this was a relationship that had simply run its full course and so while its memory could never be totally expunged it will never impede a new relationship and the new memories it will create. So inevitably it has and will continue to fade in my case, although never entirely dissappear. All the best Keith
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orgami

17 years ago

Yes

I forgot to mention that for me everything is still clear even with new memories but as you write tarnished i was so tired recently I seem harsh in my comment but I love your poetry and yes everyone too moved on and found proper partners so it all had happy moments
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

17 years ago

Sweet Keith

I have two such rings from previous marriges. I don't keep them in my jewelry box with the rest of my treasures, but in an old can where I seldom have to look at them. Too many frustrated memories... "faces in my dreams, fingers in my back" (from "Jaded Lover" a Jerry Jeff Walker song) On the brighter side, I wouldn't have missed the journey because it has made me who I am today. Your poem has awakened many memories and new thoughts... Thank you! Love, Cat
professor

professor

17 years ago

Thanks Cat

Maybe its time we all got together for a ceremoninal meltdown lol. Those memories remain of course but it is incredible how detached you can become from them as new life and love takes over. Love Keith
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 7 months ago

Ah Jayne was so right

She guided me to your presense and of that I am glad...I see within your words a light that beckons to be read, if this is anything to go by I will be back here again and again. Seabhac
professor

professor

16 years 7 months ago

Thanks Seabhac

Im glad you enjoyed this one and hope you have time to read some others. I will have to thank JayC for pointing you in my direction. Keith
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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

Dearest keith

i have just found this little piece of gold! excuse the pun! you are a remarkable poet and this tale of the ring is one that many people can relate to. although very sad when marraige doesnt work its so true that it doesnt mean it wont in the future and none of us would be here today without Love,sorrow,anger,loss,if we dont try we may as well stay in the box! Beautifully written. with much love shirley harrison