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May 24, 2009
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The Ring
I contemplate its presence,
a simple, burnished epitaph caught in an accidental sun; life empty without a finger. Name and date still legible, no longer hidden, pressed and twisting against taut skin.Lying accusingly on the dresser,
untouched, unwanted, its worn circle etched with the work of living; earth, weeds, dishes - carrots and potato-peel. But not the love it once encircled, admiring faces gazing reflected in the shine of new spun gold on entwined fingers,stretched across a lover’s table
laid for only two; clinking against crystal champagne flutes bubbling with promise, frothed in celebration.…….. But now alone, experience done, like some scarred fighter fallen on hard times punched with the hole of drunk remembrance. An ornament of time, nevermore to be worn, never thrown. A golden artifact gathering the dust of neglect and the dull tarnish of fading memory.
— professor, May 24, 2009
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Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Oh ring what tales you tell
professor
17 years 2 months ago
Thankyou Ann
Kailashana
17 years 2 months ago
Hey Keith, it is good that
professor
17 years 2 months ago
Ah New Rings for Old
faerybeki
17 years 2 months ago
Hi Keith, a wonderful poem
professor
17 years 2 months ago
Very sweet of you Beki
faerybeki
17 years 2 months ago
Lol K, let’s hope for lots
Seren
17 years 2 months ago
Dont know what to say Keith
professor
17 years 2 months ago
Stuck dumb huh JayC?
infinite_dwarf
17 years 2 months ago
Keith
professor
17 years 2 months ago
Thanks Jess
LittleRedDragon2286
17 years 2 months ago
I wrote a short story about a ring
professor
17 years 1 month ago
Well ring pulls have been
LittleRedDragon2286
17 years 1 month ago
actually I just remembered it wasn't about the ring pull itself
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
What might have been? What was? You tell the story of the ring s
professor
17 years 1 month ago
What might have been indeed Anni
orgami
17 years 1 month ago
never more
professor
17 years 1 month ago
Yes i can see how you might object to fading memory
orgami
17 years 1 month ago
Yes
Candlewitch
17 years 1 month ago
Sweet Keith
professor
17 years 1 month ago
Thanks Cat
seabhac
16 years 9 months ago
Ah Jayne was so right
professor
16 years 9 months ago
Thanks Seabhac
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Dearest keith
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