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May 23, 2009
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The Cry in the Corridor
Tonight, I can't sleep
First nights in new places are Insomnia's best friend
Big houses make a lot of noise
Creeks and thumps
It's scary, the things that go bump in the night
Wind Whistles through the hall
The corridors cry
Or is that just me?
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In my hosted chat the other night, the topic was "Blocking out Writer's Block: Excersises to inspire creativity". The excersise was "Find a book WITH CHAPTER TITLES. Turn to chapter 5. Use the chapter title as the title for your poem." The book I used was "The Secret Garden", and the chapter title was "The Cry in the Corridor". This was the result. Enjoy!
— ginnydragon54, May 23, 2009
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Rett
17 years 1 month ago
Stephanie.
Lonnie
17 years 1 month ago
Good Metaphoric Poetry!
Morgana Tragic…
17 years 1 month ago
Hey Steph
poewriter58
17 years 1 month ago
???????
Tink
17 years 1 month ago
ginny
Rett
17 years 1 month ago
hmmm, Stephanie
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