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"Heart beats for others"

 

 "Heart beats for others" 

 

Why do hearts beat for others when others know it not,

why do feelings grow and stifle when the prospect is so wrong,

wrong because unanswered, wrong because its only giving,

wrong because the song of living takes us by surprise, forgiving

 

only when its over to oneself who danced in clover

and the love subsides inside you to make carpets in the mind,

e'en though we're all so blind to its facets now divined

as futile in this dance of love's fine graces from the vine

 

of human fantasies so magic when we see through all, 

its then we grab at straws and bend our paws

to fight the cause again, in spite of all the rain again,

in spite of all the disappointments, brave again, 

 

we stand and sing our praise again, to nature's 

simple answer then, she gently gives reply and says

don't die, there's more, there's someone knocking at the door

make haste and open it ...........once more.


— Nordic cloud, May 23, 2009

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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bjp

17 years ago

Dear Ann,

I think that others sometimes have a sense. You are a gentle tale Ann of Norway. I have started the answers to your earlier question in a bit and a piece here and there, commenting on Anna's "Surrender and other poems", and commenting about JoJo's "My Xray Eyes". I will add more. But you threw the first pitch. It often takes me time to make up my mind about things. Olya knows I tend to answer questions. We met in a writing class years ago. Out of class, she loved that I would answer any question no matter how embarrassing; she was always trying to make the next one more exquisite. And public. I am, of course, more restrained here. But it seems that false fronts foster more false fronts and no one ever sees that human is ok, or what that means in the small print. So, although skittish in this new environ, the story is seeping out. Adieu, bjp
Geezer

Geezer

17 years ago

Heartbeats for Others

I Wanted to say that this makes me remember a long ago day when I poured my heart out to someone and they very gently made me see that it wasn't possible for us to have a romantic relationship. There were too many obstacles,and I didn't comprehend how insurmountable they were, until thinking of it a few yrs.later. I got over it and moved on before I saw the folly of it. I now know that she really did have feelings for me, but as I said..... Great job,O'Queen. .Gee
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xaelz

17 years ago

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i really like the first stanza...
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Ann

And I was here as well lol ... Love and hugz Jayne x x