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May 23, 2009
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Happy Birthday Sister
Happy Birthday Sister Stephanie
To one of my five sisses,
I send love and lots of kisses.
I haven't lots of money,
or things of which to boast.
But I have a sis,
who means to me the most.
She is one of five of mine,
[I really love them all]
She's just the one,
I'm closest to,the one that I can call.
The others know I love them,
and I know of me they're fond.
But,her and I, we share,
a very special bond.
I don't know how it happened,
the why or even when.
She just grew on me,as she grew,
it's beyond my ken.
So my little sister,
If I have my way,
you will have the happiest,
of a happy,Happy Birthday!
Love,Your big bro.Guy.
— Geezer, May 23, 2009
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Critiques
Fleur MacDonald
17 years 2 months ago
Just gorgeous
Geezer
17 years 2 months ago
just gorgeous
Seren
17 years 2 months ago
Bravo..
Geezer
17 years 2 months ago
Happy Birthday Sister
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
I agree with the above comments totally
Geezer
17 years 1 month ago
I agree......
Geezer
17 years 1 month ago
Joining the chorus....
Geezer
17 years 1 month ago
By the way,
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
Yay Gee, I finally got to
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