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May 22, 2009
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My word you do look queer
You’re ninety two, well blow me down
I never would have guessed
You look so young and sprightly
And seem so full of zest
You’ve got your hair, its all your own
Your teeth are yours, not false
The way you talk, it’s obvious
Your mind’s intact, of course
What’s that you say, I’m sorry
Sometimes I can’t quite hear
It’s fifty two, not ninety
My word you do look queer
© John W Fenn 22-05-2009
— shazbat, May 22, 2009
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yenti
17 years ago
John
yenti
17 years ago
I see stars
Skumpfsklub
17 years ago
Well enough done