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City-life

              
          

Plastic bag dances on the street,

twisting and dodging like a matador fighting

the charging traffic.

Adroitly avoiding the horsepower,

coming from the four directions of the wind,

it floats like a flutterby on breaths of air.

Puffing up like the chest of a teenage boy on the beach,

it dares closely the teeth-like grills of Cougars and such,

and joins the stampede of Broncos and Impalas.

Flying over the heads of milling pedestrians,

like an outsized pigeon,

it glides around the corner of a building.

Threading its' way through alleys,

and riding up-drafts of exhaust fans,

it floats gracefully toward fields of green.

The pasture of park,corralled by concrete,

ringed by gnarled oaks,beckons.

Onward it journeys.

Suddenly snatched from the sky,

by fingers of twigs on the arms

of tree giants,it struggles.

It thrashes to be free as the bus

takes it from his view,

and he wonders........

— Geezer, May 22, 2009

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years ago

I too have written of a plastic bag

But it was prose and a long time ago, I mean by saying that that I understand your poem so well and live in it so well. I am perhaps silly as I am not sure who wonders at the end? ButIi did like the poem and the wild dance of the plastic bag. They can become so decorative too sometimes, specially when caught in a flood at the side of a river, they become the flowers I use to decorate my house!!!!! Along with all the bits of grass and things caught to make a grand collage. Great butterflight of your flutterby Geezer From Ann of Norway
Tonya

Tonya

17 years ago

Well…. I believe I could look

at this poem with at least 2 different perspectives: 1 being: We all flirt with danger. I feel your plastic bag could be a metaphor, have a deeper meaning. Representing our own paths through life or difficulties. Dodging the ‘cars’ or troubles and barriers along the way. Until something major stops us in our tracks and we become temporarily immobilized. Maybe needing a little help to get going again, or until our breeze changes directions a bit. And then again 2 being: perhaps just a whimsical view and idea as you observed a plastic bag being carried by the wind currents… which is quite creative in that respect also. Either way, it’s a journey of sorts! I very much enjoyed the poem and thought it was great! I liked the title, reminded me of a hectic paced city. I think the internal logic very nice and consistent. Always, Tonya
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years ago

Brilliant, I LOVE this

Brilliant, I LOVE this Gee... I remember the first time I saw a plastic bag dancing in the wind... life huh, it throws us the funniest things... obsevation is a blessing. & you, my friend have written it up REALLY well... my fave of yours maybe (I'd have to go back & read again, but I do love this!) xxx~ Anni ~~~ "Love has nothing to do with what you are expecting to get, it's what you are expected to give -- which is everything." -Anon
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R.M.Shanmugam

16 years 11 months ago

the poem amused me with its

the poem amused me with its vivid description and made me thing the implications therefrom. shan
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rahbar

16 years 11 months ago

nice job

Hello Gee..a very factual impresion of the city life...even I can relate to it.....thanks for sharing. Rahbar.