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The Eternal Feminine

 A recharging mugful

of fresh frothy ale

 

A cool dewey morning

fragrant with the

perfumes of the earth

 

The warm yeasty

carbonation of

leavening bread

 

The breeze from the water

as the waves wear

at the lakeshore

 

And a soft 

sun shower of rain

in the afternoon

 

The benevolence of

the universe

offered up to enrich

and sustain

 

The eternal feminine

 


— Edevold, May 22, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years ago

Edevold

I liked the write it just seemed to lack a punch in there although the words of each part were good they didn't seem to hold each other in a continuous stream, I await you next few pieces, Yours Ian.T