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May 20, 2009
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You have lost her..
You have left
but the memories stay
What did I do
to be treated this way.
I look into the mirror
and I see your face again
I am a fool,
the mirror says the same.
Why did I believe
everything you told me
I stare in emptiness and hope
that you will come and hold me.
Days become months,
there is no sign of you
And all this while I thought
that you loved me too.
Should I move on now
or wait a bit more
Should I trust him who says
I'm the one he adores.
The wound that you gave me
will take a while to heal
And till then I am wondering
if I should believe what I feel.
Flowers bloom and stars shine
love is in the air
But to give away my heart
I cannot dare.
Your promises, your kisses
was everything fake?
Or was there a message for me
that I could not take.
I am awake from my dream now
and I want you to remember
There was someone who really loved you
but now you have lost her.
but the memories stay
What did I do
to be treated this way.
I look into the mirror
and I see your face again
I am a fool,
the mirror says the same.
Why did I believe
everything you told me
I stare in emptiness and hope
that you will come and hold me.
Days become months,
there is no sign of you
And all this while I thought
that you loved me too.
Should I move on now
or wait a bit more
Should I trust him who says
I'm the one he adores.
The wound that you gave me
will take a while to heal
And till then I am wondering
if I should believe what I feel.
Flowers bloom and stars shine
love is in the air
But to give away my heart
I cannot dare.
Your promises, your kisses
was everything fake?
Or was there a message for me
that I could not take.
I am awake from my dream now
and I want you to remember
There was someone who really loved you
but now you have lost her.
— Samaira, May 20, 2009
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Critiques
weirdelf
17 years ago
Lost love poems suck
Samaira
17 years ago
Jess..
weirdelf
17 years ago
I definitely see quality in your work
Samaira
17 years ago
Jess..