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Bastardized Rhyme (from chat)

Mary, Mary, quite contrary
how does tha red blood flow?
with pulling racks
and six inch tacks
and guillotines all in a row
— infinite_dwarf, May 19, 2009

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Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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Seren

Seren

17 years ago

LOL... love it

Jess cant help it but I'm laughing this is really well done ... !! love JayC x
Rett

Rett

17 years ago

Wonderful Jess

Funny as heck! Respectfully, Rett: "God made an idiot for practice, then he made a school board." Mark Twain For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years ago

hmmmph....

interesting to know that instead of this coming across like a scary flick, people are finding it amusing.... :-P guess I'll leave the horror to the pros. Thanks for the visits and comments, all! -------------------------- "Until that ‘morrow render unto me That which is mine my stipend well deserved The fairest flower of your progeny Your sons, your daughters your hopes and your dreams The cruel consequence of your conceit" - Steve Earle
Rett

Rett

17 years ago

ARRRGH!!!*shivering

Shaking, soiling myself in fear. Well, if it makes you feel better. Your mean ones really do scare me. *S* Respectfully, Rett: "God made an idiot for practice, then he made a school board." Mark Twain For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905