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Outside Our Window

Outside our window rolls the USA,
changing faces state by state, bay to bay,
for better or worse, sun or wind or rain,
from California to Portland, Maine.

We are driv’n a semi truck down the road
with a compass, the dog, and a payload.
Diesel sucking, gear grinding, city block long,
truck bigger and meaner than old King Kong.

Climb the big hill long and slow—out of LA
we go—four lanes of traffic creeps away.
Pass everything in sight when you are light;
stay to the right, but it might take all night.

Las Vegas looms bright; the view is life-size,
jewels in the desert, but if we’re wise,
we’ll pass her by, that lady in the night;               
she will  clean out the cash if we but bite.               

Power lines march across the dry desert,
like soldiers tramping through sandy blizzard.
Canyons were carved there before time was time,
in St. George, Utah, red rocks are sublime.

Heading north on I15, bright mountains                                                    
lift their lofty peaks; verdant land sustains                             
cattle, buffalo and Salt Lake City.  
Scale the heights; leave a valley so pretty.
 
Warning signs read strong cross winds possible—
laugh in Wyoming, joke in Nebraska,
with forty-four thousand pounds in the box,
we’ll stay on the ground while the big rig rocks.

We leave Iowa at the Mississippi,
now heading straight for the windy city,
right downtown past Chicago’s skyscrapers,
where we can see the movers and shakers.

We stop for a while to shop at Wal-Mart
parking right next to the Amish horse cart.
Ohio turnpike to Pennsylvania,
we will push on through New York mania.           

We’ll travel up the coast to northern Maine
then start all over and head back again.
New Jersey, next week, Alabama,
every state a new panorama.

We’re semi-retired but can make our pay;
over one thousand miles on a good day.
DOT standards we will always meet,
upstanding members of the RV fleet.

 The great United States, it’s our playground;
 outside the window, wheels go round and round.
We are driv’n a semi truck down the road
with a compass, the dog, and a payload.
 
— deelilah, May 19, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.E. Cummings, Robert W. Service, Emily Dickenson

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deelilah

deelilah

17 years ago

Now this made me laugh

How right you are. She's so sweet. I thought maybe everyone would like me because of my sweet picture (ha ha). Actually, I can't find a picture I like either. If you want trouble, try plump and old. I'm going to have to take up photo shop too. D.
themoonman

themoonman

17 years ago

Hi Dee...

enjoyed you taking us along for a big-rig-ride... a nice picturesque ride... my best to your husband, and the dog! Richard
deelilah

deelilah

17 years ago

Hi Richard

It's been hard to write a truck poem. Trucks just aren't poetic--but the scenery always is. I'm trying to tie diesel and moon images together, and it's hard. Glad you enjoyed the ride. Went past you again a few days ago, down 77. Always, Deelilah
Tonya

Tonya

17 years ago

Oh Dee, thanks

for taking me on a ride with you. I enjoyed the trip. lol . I liked the move of the poem, the views you describe from state to state. Always something to see and look at. Sounds as if experience in some areas has taught ya’ll well. (Las Vegas, the lady of the night, cross winds, staying to the right… ) I didn’t mind the repeat of your lines: “We are driv’n a semi truck down the road with a compass, the dog, and a payload.” You began your journey and ended it… and was like a new start, kind of a ‘here we go again… This is what we do’ So, I thought it fit well. Nice write with some very good city/word associations that I believe helps your reader follow along your path with you. Always, Tonya
deelilah

deelilah

17 years ago

Hi Tonya

It always amazes me how each state changes, almost right at the state line. Each state has a distinct personality, some more personality than others. But that is one of the things I enjoy about doing this. Thank you so much for your comment. Now I shall write a story going across I40 and include OK, which we just drove through. I honked. Always, Deelilah
Tonya

Tonya

17 years ago

lol

I thought i heard something!! waving back!! lol Thanks! xx Tonya
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years ago

Outside Our Window

Dee, Very descriptive piece here. I liked the way you included your dog to make it more personal. You are right about the scenery always being something to write about! I enjoyed the journey~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 11 months ago

Janice

I see I did not reply to your kind comment. Thank you. Yes the dog, standard poodle, is lying on his bed as we drive right now, absorbing the abusive bumps of the road. (Always bumpy in the big cities--right now, Omaha, Nebraska) Julie said I should use 'our' dog versus 'the dog'. I tried that, even in the beginning, and I found too many vowels running close together. 'The' seemed to sound better. Where is Julie? I always appreciate and enjoy hearing from you. Always, Deelilah