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The Afflicted

I've never worn dark sunglasses
at night, but now I see
that reality could be so stark
that one could fall and hurt a knee,

or even worse a concussion
from not ducking under a branch of a tree.

So during the day I find I'm envious
of the typical blind man's plight,
for he has heightened senses
to make up for his lost sight.

But he needs not darkened glasses
for the daytime or the night.

The irony is that he still sees
everything that's going on,
he can sense a truthful honest man
just as easily he can a "con";

and what's more, the latters desperateness
even tells him their approaching the dawn.

Nature has such a cunning way
of compensating for loss,
revenge, karma, or just plain fairness
she'll more than likely toss

towards the afflicted individual
quite possibly making him the "boss".

So feel not sorrow for the handicapped
or the challenged, as they're called too...
for good things happen along their way
and they're compensated in all they do;

for if one in five are considered afflicted,
it quite possibly may be you.
— docmaverick, May 19, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

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Antoinette Mar…

17 years ago

Hey Doc!......

you left me wanting more.....maybe thats is good...but I wished there were some more as I came to the end...a lesson learned....I liked it
Tonya

Tonya

17 years ago

Hey Doc

I think your poem has a good message for people. It is true, our other senses are sharpened when the there’s a loss of one. Not all adapt as well to the loss though. I think depends on the individual. I have known a few people that have lost their sight and were truly spectacular! Certainly much more observant with the senses they had, than myself and all of mine. (doesn’t say much for me in my favor! lol) Your rhyme theme is interesting, maybe a little forced in a few spots, but still gets your point across. Nice open poem that gives us food for thought! Always, Tonya
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bjp

17 years ago

Dear Doc,

The statistics are rather more sobering: 2% of the population is considered "well adjusted". The psychiatric, psychological and related clinical therapy professions are similarly staffed: 2% are psychologically "well adjusted" for life on earth. regards, bjp
Tonya

Tonya

17 years ago

was the poem a

poem of statistical knowledge? hmmmmmm....where are the comments of the creative ability, skill in writing.. did the poem give you any satisfaction in reading for enjoyment? lol, sorry, guess that just caught me off balance a little. Tonya I am returning to edit my comment I apologize bjp... that was very unkind of me to jump in and add my 2 cents. We all comment on things that strike us in the moment. Again, my sincere apologies.
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years ago

How very kind....

...of you to be so "gentle" with your critique. I DID struggle with this one a bit. I knew what I wanted to say, but it seemed that the words were kind of getting in the way...if that makes any sense. At any rate, I truly appreciate your feedback, as always. Write on ! #{:>{)]@++++ Doc Maverick.