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The Autonomous Lightning

It makes sense to simmer,

burn bright at 2 a.m.

then fizzle out

as we all do.

The drive home

on poorly lit

highways is made more

comfortable

by the comfort of a millisecond

of lightning.

It shines bright on me,

soundless, requesting no

quid pro quo.

Thousands of years ago

Zeus would throw his bolts

on the traveling victim of his choice,

the lightning enslaved by his

willful hand.

But nobody believes in Gods,

Jesus, or an afterlife anymore.

Our molecules, old as time,

are scattered in an unintelligble rhyme.

And so the lightning was set free

by electrons and blasphemy.

The autonomous lightning,

shields me from all this darkness.

And my never-ending soul,

was wagering on whether I'd make

it home before the rain.

I was betting on solemnity and fear,

a simple girl so set on following

that yellow line,

like a lightning bolt not drawn right.

So I curved and swerved to make up

for the mistake

Or maybe I should have been asleep instead.

Yes,

and the moon and the stars

move by their own laws,

laws that make sense to the lonely

moon when she is hiding,

when the selfish sun

refuses to ante up his light.

The clouds will say:

"I can't stop the rain,

It flows and flows."

I see,

the sky has been

set free.

I see the autonomous lightning.


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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 11 months ago

independent lighting

Seems as though nothing goes right some days,and even Mother Nature is against us. But fear not,you can always find a friend at Neopoet. Great work Sha,I especially like the line;"When the selfish sun refuses to ante up his light." I can just picture the Moon sitting there at the table,with some dark glasses on,dealing out a hand to the Sun,Stars,and Clouds. And the Sun throwing down his hand saying; "I fold." Gee.
Rett

Rett

16 years 11 months ago

My neighbor Texan

Beautifully written, quite a refreshing write. I am one of the believers in Jesus and an afterlife so there may be one or two around. *LOL* Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed this write. Well done! Respectfully, Rett: "God made an idiot for practice, then he made a school board." Mark Twain For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905
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sha_onarainyday

16 years 11 months ago

thanks for the reply Rett.

thanks for the reply Rett. I didn't mean for this poem to be about religion. It's more about the end of magical thinking. how science has explained away the magic of the universe (i.e. God in some individual's mindsets). the things people used to believe, myths like Zeus and his lightning bolts, have been replaced by hard facts. and so it goes for religion too for many people, though personally i'm a christian who believes in some kind of second phase of existence after this life. But when you get down to the molecules of it, we're all made of the same stuff that has existed since the beginning of time. Our molecules will always exist. The carbon that makes up my organic material will be absorbed to continue life, to create. To me, that's magical.
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mwrigas

16 years 11 months ago

i like the way you’ve

i like the way you've merged the realities of life in with nature and woven a tapestry of the journey through life, good times, and bad. interesting twist to the mythos. very well written and a pleasurable read. I guess i'm the second one left who believes in Christ and the afterlife. lol mike.
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sha_onarainyday

16 years 11 months ago

thanks mike. i appreciate

thanks mike. i appreciate your take on it. I didn't mean the Jesus line as truth, just an over generalization. in the media, lately (i know, i know, who trusts the media anymore???) i've noticed a few articles about faith being on the decline lately.
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bjp

16 years 11 months ago

Dear Sha (a not so simple girl),

There are a number of phrases here which really draw my eye. then fizzle out as we all do. by the comfort of a millisecond of lightning. It shines bright on me, soundless, requesting no quid pro quo. Our molecules, old as time, are scattered in an unintelligble rhyme. It is as if I were an old correspondent awaiting your reports. Your poetry is thoughtful and wide ranging. Yet, I feel these comments are insufficient. Your talent groans beneath your writing, not quite fully let out for daylight or lighting streaks, but awaiting some outcome of the contest between boldness and withholding; awaiting the outcome of its future. Sometimes you wipe the windows of the world using your heart as a rag, other times it is being doctored in Massachusetts General, while your brain is making bicep poems bulge in Texas. Be bold young Texan, bolder than the State, bolder than the ego's bathroom passes extend, bolder still, till shear panic numbs your tongue and writes screams into the lullabies we crave. bjp
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Craig Norris

16 years 11 months ago

electrons and blasphemy

enjoyed this highway ride so glad you pulled it back a millisecond of searing clarity reveals trajectory and track.