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Craig Norris

May 20, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Silken Slippers

When you sleep at night
with your window open,
beyond the verandah
and the jacaranda,
where the clouds kiss
the escarpment edge
I wait for you,
walk with me take my hand,
put your silken slippers on.

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16 years 11 months ago

No

Nicely written but not enough to engage others. You write well, I will try to check out your other poems. Send this one to her. cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present.

C

16 years 11 months ago

thanks Jess

This was never meant for others, I'm more than happy with it flying low beneath the radar. So is she. Cheers Craig

S

Sharon Piett

16 years 11 months ago

Nice imagery

Short and succinct. I love the pictures that it brings to my mind,

C

16 years 11 months ago

the best things

often come in the smallest of packages thanks Sharon. cheers Craig

C

16 years 11 months ago

even the jacaranda is smiling

and it's very nice of you to say, thank you Blanka, cheers to you and to your art. Craig