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Functionality.
Improperly my body functions anxiously
But properly bodily functions such as breathing work perfectly
Immortally is what I seek eternally till the death of me
Pertaining thoughts to release air between my lips to speak
Incredibly the neurons within my brain actively connect
Passionately creating emotions for shame and humility
But in similarity thoughts can conjure happily
Exponentially expelling energy as all living beings
Immaculately life is forever changing rapidly
Superficially causing catastrophes so diligently
Rationally civilians not really free thinking
Religiously believing nearly anything authority tells them as actuality
Legitimately they be lying due to formalities
Harassingly forcing atrocities undeniably
Tragically human beings so mindlessly thinking
Democratically or socially it is in the hands of the hierarchy
Hieroglyphically written in past centuries making for past do legalities
Critiques
weirdelf
17 years ago
This is difficult to comment on.