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nokros
nokros
May 16, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

i lay in you

 

i stray in you,frowardly, in your keep,pallidly aware of yourpanting crest,deftly, in yourwake your savvy,frailly,indicating
our course,along the shoresof a traversed road. i lay in you,resigned to the sway of your waves (of age)rekindling the memoirsof an age
 
— nokros, May 16, 2009

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Region, Country: Northern Cape, South Africa

Favorite Poets: Phillis Wheatley

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W.C.Wampler

17 years ago

I lay in you poem

N., I think this is about the ocean. It would be nice in a book of poetry, next to a picture of somebody backfloating in the water near a beach, looking up toward the sky. wcw