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Sitting all alone,
Surrounded by tones,
so loud and drawn,
in a new class,
with all her friends she sat,
feeling so excluded,
no one cares,
not a movement of a pen,
to wonder about the mind,
that wonders around within,
feels alone inside,
Depression can also hide,
poetry so dark,
she wonders how to start,
Happiness and sound,
of a heart safe and sound,
people begin to crowd,
to see the lonely clown,
buried deep in a circus,
of death and defeat,
the crazy watchers,
could save the clown,
but do they really want her around?
 

— ANC1996, May 16, 2009

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Region, Country: Florida, ZZC

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Shakespeare, Homer.

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Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years ago

Ohhh Anc

I know this feeling. Been there, that was me in high school. It gets tough. Keep your head up and be yourself. "You're all beautiful and you're all geniuses. Nobody can tell you who you are."~John Lennon. Well written poem tho, you're a bit insonsistent with the capitalization at the beginning of your lines. And you might not need so many commas. Lol. Otherwise a great poem, girl. Peace N Love Katie
ANC1996

ANC1996

17 years ago

Thanks Katie!

I'll try not to add so many commas next time:D Psh this poem was my week at school! :)Lol thanks Katie you rock! :D<3:); Adri!!