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The Country River




the river is wide and shallow,

flowing at a gentle pace,

and within the river

 lie large rocks,

which form a  crooked path

a weeping willow

stooped over the water

gently dangles it’s branches

whilst swaying in a breeze  

small fish can be seen swimming  

 as they go in and out from the reeds

 that grow along the   bank

this is a place where

 tranquillity reigns

this is a place to  dream

it is a place to relax

 

 

— karen, May 15, 2009

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years ago

Karen

I do say i am relax under this beautiful image. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara