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"Cacophony"

 

 

 

 

 

The sounds of the stars exploding, 

of the wind in the universe 

whispering about the planets, 

the sound and rhythm of the constant blinking 

of the ancient light 

reaching us from the galaxies in the heavens; 

these sounds all transport us 

into the realms of fantasy, 

where floating, 

lost in our own presence, 

we dream ourselves off the edge of the planet Earth 

into space, 

its screaming meteors, 

crashing rocks, 

and tiny tinkling particles 

creating a cacophony of magical sounds,

a concert of sweet madness.


 


 


— Nordic cloud, May 15, 2009

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years ago

Nothing is simple.

Nothing is simple. ;-) ~A Lovely highlight of infinity and beyonddddddddddddddddddddd! "No one shall be subjected to torture or to cruel, inhuman or degrading treatment of punishment." Article 6 of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.
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bjp

17 years ago

Dear Anna,

For me, the poem began with the last line, because it is here that I found a hint of the topic. Well, all poems are in some way about the poet. But the last line contains your admission. I was mentioning to Anni that each brain contains different voices. Sophmorically, we can label these voices the happy voice, sad voice, angry voice, scared voice, etc. It is almost like there is a battle going on all the time to see which voice gets to move the lips, vibrate the cords. This is the thought I had when I read your poem. By the way, a largish part of my family comes from Southampton, Sussex, Kingston upon Hull, Lincolnshire, London, etc. I have a father, stepmother, sister, daughter and cousins living in those vicinities now (which in Canada, is about the distance from here to the neighbours). I remember spending a bit of a summer in Norway in 1973, which is a while back as the crow flies. adieu, bjp
themoonman

themoonman

17 years ago

Ann...

I loved your symphony of lighted explosions... and the ride... oh the ride! Richard
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years ago

Richard I too feel i am going at speed

And then step over the edge into the nothingness so very exciting I did it in something I sent in in the prose but nobody ever looks there I don't think, except for Rett's Taxi story! Glad you were carried along thank you. bjp, I came to Norway in 1972 so must have been here when you came, there are more magpies than crows in Oslo, masses of them. "from here to the neighbours" does that mean that you are out in the wilds of Canada, how wonderful that must be, not unlike Norway too. Yours and thanks for the comments all Ann of Norway
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bjp

17 years ago

Dear Ann,

We are in a rural area of about 1,100 square kilometers which is a subdivision of a province of about 650,000 square kilometers. Our area, which is near the geographic centre of North America, has about 10 people per square kilometer, similar to Norway at 12. The provincial average is 2. We reside on the shore of the one of the worlds largest freshwater lakes, which is a dangerous lake to be on in a storm. The surface of the lake is about 25,000 square kilometers and waves are often over a meter in height, which is not much for the North Sea but we notice. A north wind can blow more than 400 kilometers down the lake before hitting us. We sit atop a small cliff (6 - 7 meters h.) in the Boreal Forest, about 15 meters from the lake. It snowed yesterday and last night but that has melted now. There won't be any more until late October. The ice has left the lake. Today we saw three eagles and two deer. Last week we saw a Great Blue Heron with a 72 inch wingspan. We have a very rotund pregnant gopher on the property. She walks like a rolling barrel. There are hundreds of geese, ducks, loons, pelicans and other migratory birds including the very large pilliated woodpecker, together with foxes and cougars, bears and moose, turkeys and prairie chicken. The deer eat the gardens and the raccoons try to set up home in the crawl spaces. Then there are the mosquitoes (too early yet). Still, I suspect our home has much of the quite and solace of your Norway. Just a whole lot flatter. Just across the lake from us is the largest settlement of Icelanders outside of Iceland. Pickerel fishing is the old local industry. I can remember buying shrimp off the boat, cooked on the way into harbour, just in front of Oslo City Hall. And, in those days, you could still find Norwegian silver coinage with a hole in the middle. adieu, bjp
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years ago

Dear Canada and my Uncle Philip

Perhaps long but it shows where some of my genes come from as regards poetry and shares a little breath of Canada with you you bjp?????Who ARE you? Yours Ann of Norway PHILIP: Found written on the back of a photograph from his sailing trips on Lake Winnipeg with his good friend Alfred from Germany. “this is a friend Alfred ( a little shorter than I am) at first launching of our boat. Named OOBY sounds sort of Scandinavian but the former owner said that it stood for OUR OWN BLOODY YACHT. Sort of pricks the bubble of Romance? I thought ATE might be a good short name. The Greek Goddess of Infatuation who led men into rash actions. I made table, draws etc. for food and cooking and a hidden toilet for extreme emergencies. We are insured from the Ontario border to Pacific not on West of Vancouver Island. HA! We are mostly armchair sailors.” Another excerpt from his letters “ At my Pelican Lake Anchorage 8 AM Sept 12th/79. Dear Ann, I am enjoying my solitude watching the sun burning the morning mist off the Lake as its shadow recedes to the Eastern shore Line. I came down yesterday leaving at the first sign of a clear sky, with commendable foresight and patience( I’m getting to rather enjoy a new found sense of procrastination) I parked by the roadside while a rainstorm drifted along the Pembina Valley ahead, it proved to be the last of many. I had my old boat with me for old times sake, I had really come down to open up the big boat cabin and air it out, as we were caught mid lake by a sudden storm on Sunday, thunder, lightening and hail, we went below and slept, trusting the anchor with ample line. We had to leave a lot of wet things in the cabin. Joy today clear skies and a brisk wind dropping to gentle airs this PM. I’m afraid I have the basic traits for a lone sailor, but I am really enjoying sharing this time with you without impairing the aforesaid solitude. As it is only 4 or 5 degrees Celsius the sun and wind are in no hurry to dry off the due( yes he wrote that), so I am sitting in my small boat cabin, with a wee gas heater keeping it snug having breakfasted on Grapefruit 2 hard boiled eggs bread butter, jam and tea......The hills are only apparent, they are just the irregular edges of the valley walls, dropping from prairie level. The lakes are puddles left from the last ice age. This puddle has no rocks in it, except along the shore lines.” Philip then does two small drawings of the scene saying “My Artistic Cycle is not at a high at the moment”. “Can’t seem to quite get the idea blame the ball point pen! DUAL HIGHWAY ON THE PRAIRIE. I did not leave enough head room for the sky. The cloud effects are marvellous and some nights in the Summer the whole Southern arc of the horizon will be lit up by innumerable flashes of lightening, too far away to be audible and the storm clouds barely visible at all. I have seen the sky dotted with small round clouds, drifting from NW to SE, lit up continuously by internal flashes, like Chinese lanterns no rain or sound except for the buzzing of mosquitoes and the flashes of fireflies, in the still starlight or in afternoon sunlight. Remember working in the fields watching huge anvil shaped Thunder heads coming up from WNW and being able to predict by their position whether they would slide away to the South or drift North of us leaving us as spectators. (I slid into the plural! but despite grammar how can just I alone watch a storm in all its majesty) spectators in a calm sunlit world, wondering if the next one will hit us. It does and we can look up into a sort of upside down sea of huge long rolling breakers and hear a steadily increasing roar of sounds the trees disappear and in seconds it is upon us, in 15 minutes it is past the sun bright again, the Oats are lying flat, they will never lift up, a lot of work to harvest. 30 acres of barley just beaten into the ground, not lost we never had it yet, and what a grand piece of Summer fallow for next year, too bad maybe but how grand the storm was how insignificant we felt, how exciting, I remember these awesome outbursts they remain with me as happy exciting memories, the destruction somehow forgotten except as reminders of the awesome power of the elements. I think I cried a little as I wrote this but I have a captive audience, I don’t have to say please listen to my tale of the great storm of 47, that threw heavy steel threshing machines on their sides and snapped off big trees, all of them either 4 or 5 ft. above the ground or pulled them out by the roots, leaving all clear for the supple saplings that survived. (Sermons in trees and running brooks?)
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bjp

17 years ago

Dear Ann,

Philip certainly was within eyeshot of our patch of tender earth. He does have a good pen hand. And to travel alone. In a boat. One of the reasons the lake is so dangerous is the weather is able to change in a very few minutes, from sun and calm to heaving, coughing spray's of water. If you can't get back to safety in 30 minutes, then luck is all that's left. I will look up an old story, that muses with the fronts from a safe distance, and, if I find it, I will post it. For it will, I think, echo the sense of awe that Philip records. I can hear the wind and the waves as I write, a dull roar fitting through the closed windows: part of the landscape. I have noticed the other inquiry but as yet don't know what to do about it. Adieu, bjp