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my curiosities

I will take passage on the sea
make manifest this destiny.
Let words be writ with moving hand
and young feet walk upon the sand.

Long distance from the shore
on gentle swells a surf ski bore,
hills of home lost to the sea
to leave an ocean nursing me,
upon a slip of bark afloat,
upon this vast Pacific moat.

Family group, sedately passes bye,
pod of young and old, now I,
their dark eyes looking into me
washed with brine so glisteningly,
intelligence so plain and free,
reflects on all my curiosities.

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 11 months ago

I loved it up to the Pacific

I loved it up to the Pacific moat. They were quite beautiful, then it changed its atmosphere and became a little more banal and lost its charm.....'scuse I for being honest! Yours Ann of Norway
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Morgana Tragic…

16 years 11 months ago

Hey Craig,

Long time no type! great to erad another one of your poems. Been behind on reading myself. Just catching up now! Really love this poem, I have a deep seeded passion for the ocean myself, was born out on the west coast of Canada here. This simply took me back. Thanks for the beautiful read my friend. Peace N Love Katie
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Craig Norris

16 years 11 months ago

British Columbian coast

Now that is a slice of heaven on earth, I spent lot of years growing up on the New Zealand coast, once paddled off shore into a pod of Dolphins, which is this humble write. Glad you enjoyed Katie, stay cool. Craig