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All The Best in 2009

All The Best  in 2009

Conquer this Fort
from the selfish worms
Rule this land with mercy and
shower love as rain on us
Ruin the roots of terrorism and
pave the way to happy and glee
Save our race from the cruels
Redeem their heridity from their tears
Save Her from the hands of swindlers
make Her flag to fly with pride
You can and you only can
Change this dirty trend
to a clear way of progress
My dear mother
Conquer our grieves and hunger
Spread your glory in your new rule


This poem hasbeen dedicated to my beloved Leader
Mother Dr J.Jayalalitha
A I A D M K
Chennai Tamilnadu India


                                                           SAKTHI S RAVICHANDRAN  MA,M.Phil PGDCA  
                                                                            LECTURER IN ENGLISH


                                                                                           KANCHIPURAM
— SAKTHEEE2007, May 09, 2009

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Geezer

Geezer

17 years 1 month ago

BEST IN 2009

WOW! SAKKKK! i never knew..... you are something else,sakkkk! you are in some elite company! i never would have thought that you had doctorates and your mother was in polotics! the only flaw i see in your work is so minor that it is hardly worth mentioning.i would change heridity to heritage. you have written a poem worthy of praise this time for sure! i stayed with your train of thought the whole time. your word usage is a little bit better than you normally let on. watch out sakkkk... your personna is slipping! i really liked this one sakkkk, i know of the struggles in your land and know that they are no joking matter. i too wish for a more peaceful world,sakkkk. i wish there were no need for guns to kill each other with. but i know that there are brave people in this world who will defend their lands and their rights and the rights of others.no matter if we defend them with words or bullets, we can make a difference,sakkkk. i admire some one like yourself sakkkk, who says what he means and means what he says. gee. p.s. what makes you think that i am a woman? does geezer mean something in your country that i am not aware of? gee.