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May 07, 2009
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Assaulted !
My sorrow overwhelms me
my leaky eyes do shout,
what my eyes and wetted hands
have me crying, all about.
Yes, I can see the sunshine
only not around my life,
it goes on forever 'round me
but cuts me like a knife.
My tomorrows are surely numbered
and the pressure in my chest,
shows me only doom and gloom
which is the "bright side", at best.
Physically assaulted
and what's worse, 'twas by a "friend,
now, I can't hear out my right ear
so my music just might end.
So sad's my heart on this fine day
because of what I've lost,
our "friendship" didn't last, at all...
and Forever was the cost.
my leaky eyes do shout,
what my eyes and wetted hands
have me crying, all about.
Yes, I can see the sunshine
only not around my life,
it goes on forever 'round me
but cuts me like a knife.
My tomorrows are surely numbered
and the pressure in my chest,
shows me only doom and gloom
which is the "bright side", at best.
Physically assaulted
and what's worse, 'twas by a "friend,
now, I can't hear out my right ear
so my music just might end.
So sad's my heart on this fine day
because of what I've lost,
our "friendship" didn't last, at all...
and Forever was the cost.
— docmaverick, May 07, 2009
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themoonman
17 years 2 months ago
Doc...
docmaverick
17 years 2 months ago
Yeah, Richard....
Antoinette Mar…
17 years 2 months ago
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Tonya Greenlee
17 years 2 months ago
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