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May 10, 2009
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The Labyrinth
Even in my mostconscious moment,there's part of methat's still asleepEven in my mostjoyous moment,there's part of methat's sorrowful
Even in my most
magnanimous moment,
there's part of me
that's still unkind
Even in my most
enlightened moment,
there's part of me
that's hard to findEven in my highestmoment of confidencethere's part of methat's still in doubtEven in my highestmoment of claritythere's part of methat's still confusedEven in my mostpleasurable moment,there's part of methat's still in painEven in my highestmoment of truth,there's part of methat lives a lieEven in my mostforgiving moment,there's part of methat's unforgivingEven in my mostpatient moment,there's part of methat's always hurried
Even in my moment
of serenity
there is part of me
that's in conflict
Even in my mostpeaceful moment,there's part of methat's still at warEven in my most
lived moment
there is part of me
that wants to die
Even in my mostliberated moment,there's part of methat's still a slave
Even in my most
magnanimous moment,
there's part of me
that's still unkind
Even in my most
enlightened moment,
there's part of me
that's hard to findEven in my highestmoment of confidencethere's part of methat's still in doubtEven in my highestmoment of claritythere's part of methat's still confusedEven in my mostpleasurable moment,there's part of methat's still in painEven in my highestmoment of truth,there's part of methat lives a lieEven in my mostforgiving moment,there's part of methat's unforgivingEven in my mostpatient moment,there's part of methat's always hurried
Even in my moment
of serenity
there is part of me
that's in conflict
Even in my mostpeaceful moment,there's part of methat's still at warEven in my most
lived moment
there is part of me
that wants to die
Even in my mostliberated moment,there's part of methat's still a slave
Comments
jadewood
17 years ago
Hello
leonard daranjo
17 years ago
Thank you Jade
Kailashana
17 years ago
So nice to (see)read you
leonard daranjo
17 years ago
Thank you Kailashana
themoonman
17 years ago
Leonard...
leonard daranjo
17 years ago
Thank you Richard
deelilah
17 years ago
Hello Leonard
leonard daranjo
17 years ago
Thank you Deelilah
Wafi
17 years ago
How Beautifully Described!
leonard daranjo
16 years 12 months ago
Thank you Wafi
themoonman
17 years ago
Leonard...
leonard daranjo
16 years 12 months ago
Thanks again Richard
Janice Pearce
16 years 11 months ago
The Labyrinth
leonard daranjo
16 years 11 months ago
Thank you Janice
Mark
16 years 11 months ago
I like the end lines most Leonard
leonard daranjo
16 years 11 months ago
Thank you Mark
Taniaspoetry
16 years 11 months ago
Polarity in the labyrinth