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May 07, 2009
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Upon a Baby's Chest (expanded from chat)
Upon a Baby's Chest
Tears upon a baby's chest
Pain in a mother's throat
How is she to care for him
The child on whom she dotes
Cracked and blistered is the hand
Tremblin' with diaper and pin
To place upon the toddlin' child
How can you call life sin?
Tears upon a mother's face
Worry upon the brow
Alone and friendless, no family,
But she carries on somehow
Growing up together
Mother-child and son
She cries to see the trusting eyes
And finds her heart undone
Mother-love is precious
The hardships now endured
No rest for her teenaged feet
Till his comfort is assured
Can a back be turned to this?
Can eyes be tightly closed?
How can a person turn away,
Another look down their nose?
Rejoice at the choice she made,
The path that she has chosen,
For easily could her back be turned
And her heart be frozen.
Tears upon a baby's chest
Pain in a mother's throat
How is she to care for him
The child on whom she dotes
Cracked and blistered is the hand
Tremblin' with diaper and pin
To place upon the toddlin' child
How can you call life sin?
Tears upon a mother's face
Worry upon the brow
Alone and friendless, no family,
But she carries on somehow
Growing up together
Mother-child and son
She cries to see the trusting eyes
And finds her heart undone
Mother-love is precious
The hardships now endured
No rest for her teenaged feet
Till his comfort is assured
Can a back be turned to this?
Can eyes be tightly closed?
How can a person turn away,
Another look down their nose?
Rejoice at the choice she made,
The path that she has chosen,
For easily could her back be turned
And her heart be frozen.
— Rett, May 07, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
17 years 1 month ago
Here here Rett !!
Rett
17 years 1 month ago
Many thanks JayC
theladyblue
17 years 1 month ago
awww Rett!
Rett
17 years 1 month ago
Awww thanks Emarie
Rett
17 years ago
Wow, I must have been busier
Rett
17 years ago
Oh my, another one I missed
Rett
17 years ago
even slush
Race_9togo
17 years ago
Rhett
Rett
17 years ago
*chuckle* Thank you Jim