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Seren
Seren
May 07, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

To a Higher Truth we soared

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— Seren, May 07, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Lonnie

17 years 2 months ago

Nicely done, JayC !

A terse little piece with just enough power to pack a punch! Well-chosen words and vivid imagery make this a winner for sure!
Seren

Seren

17 years 2 months ago

Lonnie !!

This was a little bit of fun with tounge in cheek LOL ... but thank you LOL It makes me blush to read it ... Thanks for taking the time out to leave a comment to be honest didnt expect any comments on this one ... you take care :) Love and Light JayC x

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