Why

to leave comment.. hopefully others will read and give more input. They can also give some insight if they think some of the changes help or hinder. I changed the 1st line, ‘cause when you just ask ‘why do we all ask this question?’ I am wondering.. okay, what question? But, if you start it off.. ‘why?’ and then skip down, you can immediately see the subject is ‘why?’ *trying to get away from the repetition of repeating why, yet still letting the idea remain. *you can still get the same notion, but omitting some words. Like ‘yes’ in the third line. I hope I got the gist of your 4th line, I felt it was worded a little awkward.. I will let you just read through and see the suggestions. You are getting there! This is another very good subject I feel a lot of people can relate to. It also is giving them a good message. That there is hope to find someone very special. Just for themselves. Regardless of any past transgressions. Doing Good Press!! Always Sincere, Tonya