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A single tear falls for
    for the world to see

All who love do cry.

For what they have is enough.




NM 1997
— TheDarkOne, May 05, 2009

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Region, Country: Western Cape, South Africa, ZAF

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yenti

yenti

17 years 1 month ago

A tear

You have a paradox or whatever the word is, that a single tear falls for the world to see, Yet all who love do cry. Reminds me of Nero in the film as he shed a tear in the glass for Rome. To write this at 12 years old was very good as it is as deep as the Ocean in it's simplicity. I use to write around that age for School Mags but can never get a copy. But at 15 I still have my writing book of bits, and on reflection we were very deep and tense in our thoughts then LOL Keep on with your writing and now I think you should be 24 so there are many words to be written as yet, Yours Ian.T