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The Importance of Being Sane (Meeting an Old Man on a train)
I took this shot
not offered,
bought.
I took it to the train.
And though we traveled
side by side
I knew you most in vain.
We talked our talks,
regular,
as insanity can be
(and alcohol tinged reverie,
in stranger's company).
We thought the thoughts
of majesty of which most
fear to tread.
Though we went by train
and dare I say
Made love in box cars
with words,
spurned
(know touch, no touch,
have I known
from such a weather-worn man).
I never knew a beast
that ticked so quiet (so in sync with his own want).
The same (the same as I) with lust,
trust (in himself alone, with convictions that
must be discerned
from past sins of easy-going minds).
I must confess
I loved you not the least,
but most.
I'll love you in the end.
And when our minds
touched (tasted the insanity)
I new you were my friend,
my lover, my heart,
My new start (revolution of all the lost thoughts,
to an ever-awakening young mind).
And I fell apart when it ends.
When it ends-
We are again-
SANE.
Simple minds in the boxcar
of a train.
And I wake
to the memory
of sake
and- (reluctant on opinion) long lost friends.
But I'll know you (by the sharpness of your wit)
when I see you (by the beauty of your mind)-
sober as the sun.
Touched with wars
yet to be won.
And no fear left on your tongue.
Comments
bjp
17 years ago
Dear Sha,
Edevold
17 years ago
This is pretty cool writing
Craig Norris
16 years 11 months ago
rolling with the box car